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| scriblets1an2 2008-07-05 ch 1,  | abuseshort and sweet but so true. screams are terrible. it makes me think of a horror flick or something. |
| h20pologirl 2008-01-05 ch 1, | abusescary |
| Arwen Dune 2008-01-03 ch 1, | abuseYour really good at Haikus I can't write them for my life |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseagain, i like your word choice, but it's so short. i keep thinking, "ah, that's it??" like i need to know more details, descriptions...what happened to the girl in the story...why? you know what i mean? try putting a few haiku into one poem and telling a story or just adding details to the one important thought. |
| Daughter of the Faeries 2007-09-30 ch 1, | abuseWow...I hate screaming, too. Great diction; you really have a way with words. |
| x.Insanely Serene.x 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseumm, kinda dark & i know what you mean. love it... |
| Cross Rose 2007-07-28 ch 1, | abuseReally good. I really like it. |
| perpetual questions 2007-07-21 ch 1, | abuseI hate listening to screaming too. Imagery is strong; great haiku. [favouriting this] |
| Hells-a-singing 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseSometimes you scream of pain sometimes its otu of frustration but if you keep the screams in too long they'll burst out of no where...trust me I know it's happened |
| Pelirizado 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI don't know if many people actually understand what you are saying here. I agree with you though. This type of screaming solves nothing, it is an expression of two egos that want to come out on top, and instead of listening, out come the screams, "Why don't you ever listen to me?" Sad, but true. On the other hand, a scream of pain or frustration, which I don't think you were talking about, can be very relieving. Again, doesn't really solve anything, but not much does. |
| Basara 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abusethe ambiance of a scream... nice... |
| Kaitlyn J. Richards 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abusevery good. I hate listening to crying, personally. it gets to me. screams are kinda disturbing. anyway, I like the poem. :] and thanks for your review! |
| j'aimejohnstamosilesttresch... 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abusei loveit! thanx for the review! |
| Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseI hate sreaming too. Everytime I hear screaming I twitch and I assume the worst. This was a really good Haiku. kudos for you. |
| Ariel of Wonderland 2007-07-13 ch 1, | abuseA. You're not weird, hunnybunny! There's no such thing. Everybody's a little different. Some more than others. I run around calling myself Queen of Thunder and singing opera. Just remember: It could always be worse... B. I like this. I understand what you're saying, but everyonce in awhile, you seriously should just screech until your lungs are sore. It's very good stress relief. Keep writing! |