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fatbird33 2008-08-26 . chapter 1
ahh yes, screaming is not good. this poem was though
scriblets1an2 2008-07-05 . chapter 1
short and sweet but so true. screams are terrible. it makes me think of a horror flick or something.
h20pologirl 2008-01-05 . chapter 1
scary
Arwen Dune 2008-01-03 . chapter 1
Your really good at Haikus I can't write them for my life
smile for the sunshine 2007-12-28 . chapter 1
again, i like your word choice, but it's so short. i keep thinking, "ah, that's it??" like i need to know more details, descriptions...what happened to the girl in the story...why? you know what i mean? try putting a few haiku into one poem and telling a story or just adding details to the one important thought.
Daughter of the Faeries 2007-09-30 . chapter 1
Wow...I hate screaming, too. Great diction; you really have a way with words.
x.Insanely Serene.x 2007-08-13 . chapter 1
umm, kinda dark & i know what you mean.

love it...
Cross Rose 2007-07-28 . chapter 1
Really good. I really like it.
a silenced revolution 2007-07-21 . chapter 1
I hate listening
to screaming too. Imagery
is strong; great haiku.

[favouriting this]
Hells-a-singing 2007-07-17 . chapter 1
Sometimes you scream of pain sometimes its otu of frustration but if you keep the screams in too long they'll burst out of no where...trust me I know it's happened
Pelirizado 2007-07-17 . chapter 1
I don't know if many people actually understand what you are saying here. I agree with you though. This type of screaming solves nothing, it is an expression of two egos that want to come out on top, and instead of listening, out come the screams, "Why don't you ever listen to me?" Sad, but true. On the other hand, a scream of pain or frustration, which I don't think you were talking about, can be very relieving. Again, doesn't really solve anything, but not much does.
Basara 2007-07-16 . chapter 1
the ambiance of a scream...

nice...
Kaitlyn J. Richards 2007-07-16 . chapter 1
very good. I hate listening to crying, personally. it gets to me.
screams are kinda disturbing.
anyway, I like the poem. :]
and thanks for your review!
j'aimemavie 2007-07-15 . chapter 1
i loveit! thanx for the review!
Duzen Broken DreamZ 2007-07-14 . chapter 1
I hate sreaming too. Everytime I hear screaming I twitch and I assume the worst.

This was a really good Haiku. kudos for you.
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