ahh yes, screaming is not good. this poem was though

short and sweet but so true. screams are terrible. it makes me think of a horror flick or something.

scary

Your really good at Haikus I can't write them for my life

again, i like your word choice, but it's so short. i keep thinking, "ah, that's it??" like i need to know more details, descriptions...what happened to the girl in the story...why? you know what i mean? try putting a few haiku into one poem and telling a story or just adding details to the one important thought.

Wow...I hate screaming, too. Great diction; you really have a way with words.

umm, kinda dark & i know what you mean.

love it...

Really good. I really like it.

I hate listening
to screaming too. Imagery
is strong; great haiku.

[favouriting this]

Sometimes you scream of pain sometimes its otu of frustration but if you keep the screams in too long they'll burst out of no where...trust me I know it's happened

I don't know if many people actually understand what you are saying here. I agree with you though. This type of screaming solves nothing, it is an expression of two egos that want to come out on top, and instead of listening, out come the screams, "Why don't you ever listen to me?" Sad, but true. On the other hand, a scream of pain or frustration, which I don't think you were talking about, can be very relieving. Again, doesn't really solve anything, but not much does.

the ambiance of a scream...

nice...

very good. I hate listening to crying, personally. it gets to me.
screams are kinda disturbing.
anyway, I like the poem. :]
and thanks for your review!

i loveit! thanx for the review!

I hate sreaming too. Everytime I hear screaming I twitch and I assume the worst.

This was a really good Haiku. kudos for you.