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Reviews For: My Broken Heart
Cracked Mirror Image 2007-07-14 . chapter 1
that was great. nice show of emotion. it sounds almost exactly like my friend was when she was broken up with...but for her it was because she wanted to go further and he wasn't ready...

- gRaCe
concerto49 2007-07-13 . chapter 1
There's a few typos and erros but besides that - I think if you really loved someone, you wouldn't leave them just because of that. If not, he/she wouldn't be worth loving anyway, so there shouldn't be a reason to be sad about it. And so many people hurt themselves - well it's more brave to live on and face this world. It's harder too.

By the way, out of your list, I really liked Yu Yu Hakusho too.
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