I thought it was great. The characters are already well developed in such a short time. I actually had the visuals in my head has she cuts her hair. Cant wait to read the rest.

Nice. I like it so far. The rest should be interesting

Poor Marla! I hope she is alright. I think she is a good charector and I have the same opinion of suicide as her. I think this story looks interesting and am looking forward to reading an update :)