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| simpleplan13 2007-10-23 ch 1,  | abuseI really like the rhyming... its great and the ending is great too.. nicely written |
| Dillutional 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseThank you for your reveiw. I enjoy seeing that people enjoy my work. This is quite amazing and I really enjoyed it. It makes you think, and I like that quality in a peice. That the meaning is not just given to you, but illuded in the narrative of the peice. Very nicely done. |
| The Un-great-ful 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseIts like a bar code temporally stamped across the fraction of existance you've been designated to analyze and interpret. sudden shocks of glory and depression forged maniacally as if by a schizophrenic iron monger. Maybe this dimension is not wrought for the likes of us. |