wow, I just saw this...it's so amazingly touching. Are you talking of real things here or is this fictional? Did you really have a crush on a guy who didn't like you back? If yes, I can tell you I know how you feel, because that happened to me years ago and I still can't forget him.

Great one-shot

Really sweet poem (: Your emotions are clearly portrayed, and it's good that you're trying to get over him. Beautiful writing, simplistic yet touching (:

x mandy

That's so sad but it's good that you're trying to get over him.

great poem, it was well written :)

everybody could relate like that, sometimes it's just platonic lav.