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| outsidersgirl 2007-09-01 ch 7,  | abusea good chapter |
| outsidersgirl 2007-08-06 ch 6, | abusewill her and tyler ever get back together |
| 90% evil reviewer 2007-08-05 ch 6, anon. | abuseyay!! u go girl!! she's finally moving on!! I can just imagine stupid Tyler's expression of shock..hehehe |
| outsidersgirl 2007-08-05 ch 1, | abuselooks good |
| vio923 2007-08-01 ch 5, | abuseCute story. What did he do? You have a typo: "Have an official date with Tyler, actually" -- shouldn't that say "Jake?" |
| adnama3121 2007-08-01 ch 5, | abuseSeems like a good story so far, lol, can't wait for the next chapter ~Amanda~ P.S. I usually write like essay long reviews, but that's later in the story when I have something to rant about and the story really gets going, so you can expect those from me later on, lol |
| remae 2007-07-17 ch 3, | abusethis story is cute! I loved the flashbacks between the two kids in chapter one, and the emotion in the prologue. keep it up! |
| reallyinnocent2007 2007-07-16 ch 2, | abusethis is a good chapter one. except when you said the lifeguard was the little boy's brother went out showing us reader how she came to that conclusion. neway... i still like it and cant wait to read more. |
| lil.miss.sammi 2007-07-15 ch 2, | abusegreat second chapter HOW CUTE IS TYLER! i was like aw haha update soon! |
| reallyinnocent2007 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abusethis is a good prologue. it set up a good foundation for the rest of the story. i like it. um i cant wat to read more. |
| lil.miss.sammi 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abusehey very nice prologue! u've got me so hooked lol so what DID he do to her to make her feel so bad? update soon!! |
| trix-a-belle 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abusewho is he and what did he do? obviously you're not goin to tell me because then there would be no point in me reading the story (which i am going to do) update soon! xNx |
| MelGrl 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseTyler sounds like a jerk. I mean if he didn't talked to Alyssa for a year after he screws up, he doesn't deserves her. I hope Alyssa will be able to get over him and find someone else. Please continue writing the chapters. =) |