Great poem. I could feel the emotions. Nice work.

Twilight Starr

Oh sam, I love you! Well, you know, sorta. ;) Anyways, chin up, boobs out, talk shit, kick ass, and we all love you-lol, now go bug Aaron..rofl...*ahem*, a.k.a. "Oliver." By the way, have you let him read my chapters? Message back, por favor! ;D

This sounds depressing and that the 'I' in the poem is weak and passive. It's more tragic, and annoying that someone could just let go like that. Be brave and push on. The world still has a bright side and still has hopes. I guess I was once like that. Though, it was vivid, and a little scary.