I liked the idea of foreign emotions - where did that come from?
A lot of listing going on.
So we've switched POVs have we? Thought last chapter was about a different character.
Think it lack a bit of overall emotion-capture, feelings, and detailed description. Like, a lot was said, and happened, but less of how, why, and in relation to the characters.
Anyhow. Cheers.

This story is... different. I like the characters attitudes and the way the story is going so far. I wonder why Lilife (sorry if i spelled it wrong) wants to kill the Angel of death so much?? U got a new fan, ill chekk regularly. Chekk my story Haze: a mercenariespath out too. It coincidentally also deals with a kid who is the Grim reaper. I give ur story an 8 out of 10. add sum description to your story and it would be perfect.

Ok... now here's the problem... YOUR COPYING DN ANGEL! DN ANGEL: Daisuke Niwa Angel
DNA

or Dark Night Angel... you kind of copied the name... other then dat... well... don't know... didn't even bother reading dis story

Very interesting and original. It's like a breath of fresh air to find something that isn't about some band or a school. That's all writers seem to write about these days.

Well, do update again soon.

If you have the time, you could check out some of my works.

It seems like we'll have a new meaning for DNA, instead of the plain old science one. It reminds me of vampires and shinso. Perhaps it's a little amusing too. What was the line separated meant to be for? I thought it went on, like there was no break from the scenes. Maybe I'm wrong. A tad confused.

I used to know someone that was Libra, at least I thought she was. I guess I shouldn't talk about that. Yes, it's Science. I couldn't define the line
between sci-fi and fantasy, so I've been doing fantasy until lately. Anime, games, and related are cool.