I hardly ever read fictionpress, let alone incest (which freaks me out 90% of the time ^^' heheh), but your summary's irresistable. And after five minutes, I decided to read it. So, now, I've completed my first incest story. And it's gorgeous. :) Your writing's beautiful. Loved it.

O.O THAT'S THE SAME STORY YOU USED FOR THE PREQUEL TO BLOOD RED IN FOR FF ACCOUNT!

Lovely, lovely story. The ending was very bittersweet and had me hoping the same as Lythe and Hans. You wrote this very beautifully and poignantly. Excellent!

Keep writing,

- Lithely

This was really sad, but you wrote it beautifully.

Good story

So sad, but beautifully written. I even wish it was more than a one-shot :) Loved it.

Aw
This is so sad!
You wrote this so beautifully!!
great job!
:D

This is so sad... *sobs*

This story is very well written. Keep up the good work! Ü