 Acaylee 2007-10-12 . chapter 1I hardly ever read fictionpress, let alone incest (which freaks me out 90% of the time ^^' heheh), but your summary's irresistable. And after five minutes, I decided to read it. So, now, I've completed my first incest story. And it's gorgeous. :) Your writing's beautiful. Loved it. |
 Dreams for Wings 2007-08-21 . chapter 1O.O THAT'S THE SAME STORY YOU USED FOR THE PREQUEL TO BLOOD RED IN FOR FF ACCOUNT! |
 Slander By Osmosis 2007-08-11 . chapter 1Lovely, lovely story. The ending was very bittersweet and had me hoping the same as Lythe and Hans. You wrote this very beautifully and poignantly. Excellent!
Keep writing,
- Lithely |
 SecretWhispers 2007-07-15 . chapter 1This was really sad, but you wrote it beautifully. |
 KaiaLeigh 2007-07-14 . chapter 1Good story |
 CK Shorty 2007-07-14 . chapter 1So sad, but beautifully written. I even wish it was more than a one-shot :) Loved it. |
 Lavi R 2007-07-14 . chapter 1Aw
This is so sad!
You wrote this so beautifully!!
great job!
:D |
 China Doll Rockstar 2007-07-14 . chapter 1This is so sad... *sobs* |
 keepyourpantson 2007-07-14 . chapter 1This story is very well written. Keep up the good work! Ü |