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| strange but true 2008-04-09 ch 14,  | abuseoh, this all too familiar. i think i understand a lot of this more than i should. brilliantly written |
| under the influence 2007-11-26 ch 14, | abuseIs Trevor gay? I hope not...hehehe...cute chap |
| Onia Black 2007-11-21 ch 14, | abuseCan I kick Jenny? Please? Really hard? no? Not even a little hard? UGH. Translation for Trevor's speech: You date the wrong guys, they treat you horribly, you don't see that guys like you because you don't even pay attention, i am in love with you, marry me. and then she's all "...are you gay?" WHAT AN IDIOT lkfjdklajfdklajd WE ALL KNOW SHE SUBCONCIOUSLY LIKES TREVOR SO SHE SHOULD DATE HIM ALREADY DAMMIT. anywhoo. Update soon deary. I hope you liked my comment xD |
| Onia Black 2007-11-06 ch 13, | abuseHAH wow...awkward much. my friend's in the theatre and the only people she ever has crushes on are gay guys lmfao! that was a good twist. keep writing ;P |
| under the influence 2007-11-06 ch 13, | abuseThat kinda sucks, but in a way it doesn't...I'm glad she at least has a couple of friends... |
| under the influence 2007-11-06 ch 11, | abusebetween this chapter and the last one, I just wanted to cry...this poor girl |
| X.x.XJodzterX.x.X 2007-11-06 ch 13, | abuseOMG I can't believe he's gay!! I think Jenny should go to the dance with Trevor. Great update and thanks for the e-mail :D x |
| X.x.XJodzterX.x.X 2007-11-04 ch 12, | abuseI feel sorry for Trevor, he seems like a really nice guy. Jenny seems like a bit of a bully to him but I can sympathise with her for what she's been through. I know what it's like to have a step dad and I know what she went through. I really love the way you write this, it's brilliant. Your description is great! Please update! |
| Onia Black 2007-10-29 ch 12, | abusehm getting interesting ^_^ i want her and trevor to get together update soon |
| under the influence 2007-10-10 ch 7, | abuseI liked this chapter...it was cute :) |
| under the influence 2007-10-01 ch 2, | abusewhat an **...ugh... I noticed one mistake: '...he’s say something like, “Let’s dance, baby,”...' Should read HE'D... Ortherwise, great work! I'm definitely enjoying the story... |
| under the influence 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseWow! I really like this...am looking forward to reading more. As for the title...no suggestions (YET) |
| Onia Black 2007-09-29 ch 9, | abuse>.< MIKE IS SUPPOSED TO BE PERFECT maybe he's just being a guy xP and Trevor is SO sweet X] |
| Onia Black 2007-09-01 ch 8, | abusehm i like what mr. joe said at the end. it was a good closer to the chapter. she was kind of mean to trevor >.< he's so nice to her. i don't get it. anyway. UPDATE SOON. |
| Onia Black 2007-08-10 ch 7, | abuseAweh. Mike's so damn sweet. this is really a good story. Keep up the good work =] update soon. |