wow. what a fabulous story. It was so heartfelt and intimate. I actually cried. A lot.

I loved the way you developed Jenny's character, the way you introduced new aspects of her life with each passing chapter making it so pointed, yet not taking a way from the here and now manner in which the story was told. Your descriptions were vivid and real, not overdone ( which is rare!) and the narrative flowed smoothly throughout.

What was particularly nice was he chapter titles,. and the way they related so perfectly to the events. I'm going on the lyrics you gave, as I've never heard most (any) of the songs, but I'm sure they fitted in as well.

The other really great thing about the story was how much emotion was actually involved. There were parts when I couldn't stop laughing, and parts which were so sad. yet all through the story everything flowed. It was flawless.
Don't stop Writing.

Aww what a great ending! I have loved this story soo much. The way you used your words made me feel what the characters were feeling and I just loved Trevor! :-) It's really sad to see it end!

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Oh I loved it
it's amaizing congrats
you should do it a book
siriously

xx Karla E.

Hey, I don't really have much to say but i just wanted to say that this story is really good and you are a great writer.

Damn, I never wanted this to end!
I stayed up until 2 in the morning because I had to finish it. I love Trevor, I'm sorry, you're truly amazing.

Great story line, this is amazing x

This is fantastic! I love it so far. Jenny is such a little rebel. I love her :)
I saw the other reviews and found your YouTube post. Quite impressive with all the sound effects sand such added in. It's really neat the way that you put everything together. The story really flows and that makes it easy and enjoyable to read. So that's what I think I'll do. I'll keep reading.
-Kelsey Miranda

Cool. Did you draw those? If you did, that's pretty good. Haha, it's funny that that's exactly how I pictured Trevor. :D I LOVED this story so much!! Thanks for writing it. :D :D

Wow... Well, that's about all I can say. :D :D This was amazing. I loved every word of it. I'm happy you didn't fix everything right then and there. I like started crying while I was reading this. I'm so happy you finally finished this!! :D

Wow. I'm like really ** at Jarrod right now. I wish that Trevor had kicked his butt. I really hope she and Trevor end up together. When her mom was in the kitchen and stuck up for her that way, I'm over here going, "Go Alice. Go Alice. Go Alice," LOL. Very good chapter. I can't wait for the next one.

Alexis: This story still has more to go, I just haven't uploaded the final chapters yet. I'm still working on them at the moment but I will upload them as soon as I've finished writing. I hope you will be able to read them and let me know what you think. Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad you like the story so far. :)

This is one of the greatest stories I've ever read. I gave me everythink I look for in a book. I was wondering, did you continue this story in like another "book"? Or is this just as if you havent uploaded the rest yet? I'm not sure if you can answer through this but I'm goin to suscribe to your youtube channel because that's where I found the story. Pleas continue writing because I have really enjoyed what I read. :D

What a sad story :-( But beautifully written! I really want her to go with Trevor, he seems so sweet.

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YAY! I want her mom and dad to get back together so bad. The part about Mr. Joe made me cry. And the part where she and her Dad were sitting in the car. :'( :'(

Oh! Please write more soon. I love this story so much. I think this should be a book!