I like this. It's a litle different.

I love this. Everything about it. Once again, good job.

You've got rhyming skills, nice. I love the phrases "I clenched a faith" and "hands were cold and tender". The imagery is pretty. It feels very otherworldly, with the description of the skies, so it took me a second reading to come back to earth and realize that the second stanza was describing a shower; the last line hit me the first time though.