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Slightly Spazztic
2008-07-18
ch 1,
abuseMygod.

I like that SO much.

Dark humour...
I thought she was going to be face to face with murderers/rapists/vampires/hobos...instead -- Girlscouts!

Love it!
-undergroundlove
2008-06-25
ch 1,
abuseaha! this is hilarious!!
XDD i was expecting...yeah...XD!!
TragedyinComedy
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abusehaha i loved it!

totally a surprise ending bet your class loved it!
krazed.hypa.ivii
2008-01-30
ch 1,
abuseAHAHAHAH that is pure hilarity

but dont make fun of those cookies. theyre good. i just bought some a coupla days ago ]: ahahah :] added you onto all my faves and alerts! :]
sunshinexx
2007-12-28
ch 1,
abuseomg. hilarious! oh and im glad you started up your "once upon a one-night stand" again. =))
shilly
2007-11-28
ch 1, anon.
abusehaha you got away with the last line in a class?

nice work
Jayjack
2007-11-24
ch 1,
abusehahahaha.

isn't everyone afraid of Girl Scouts? I mean why exactly? Boy Scouts are so much worse.
XxFallenxX
2007-10-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseHaha. That was funny, but every knows that Boy Scouts are an evil cult. The neighbor boy tied my feet together with the Devil's revese bow-tie slipknot or whatever. I couldn't get the rope off until I hopped to my house for a pair of scissors. If those boy scouts start selling cookies... I shudder to think.
The Cruel Irony
2007-08-12
ch 1,
abuseOh. My. Fucking. God!! Hahaha, this is halarious, Simmy! (I can call you that, right? It's alot faster than simonexsays..) I was definatly not expecting that.. I mean.. well.. Girl Scouts? They are the epitomy of evil, creepy things! I was one.. at one point.. but really, they do scare me with their little poisoned cookies and their awesome little brown vests. The coolest cult ever! *dances* But scary beyond all reason. *nods*

And you mentioned an owl hooting! Well.. I have to tell you.. that was no owl.

.. It was me. In a giant owl costume. Why? Because that's just how I roll. :)

xox Yazzi
Fleeting Moment
2007-07-29
ch 1,
abuseOMG! I'm laughing my butt off!
deep cut
2007-07-27
ch 1,
abusehaha i was suprised by the ending, been a girl scout but i never sold cookies
wat is the girl doing out so late anyway?? i mean, to sell cookies... bet her mother's gonna kill her when she gets home
i liked the story though, nice twist ^^
Brizlack
2007-07-20
ch 1,
abuseLawl. What are those girls doing out so late at night!? Do your mothers know where you are? *scolds mockingly*
XD This was great.
bedazzled892
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseHaha! I can picture that happening. I used to be a girl scout myself back in the day, but those little monsters can be annoyingly persistent. Nevermind the fact that the little buggers are so angelic looking in the first place. I love children, but frankly, sometimes they scare the shit out of me. Little ankle biters. Back to the point, the story was great!

-Sarah
Pointy Objects
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuseHaha, I like that. Most stories that you read, you're supposed to generally forget about everything around you and just focus on the words. But I think if you're reading GOOD writing, then you can do both. Like when you went on about your character hearing her pulse in her ears, I could hear my pulse in my ears. And now i'm listening for them, and nothing's happening. MUy Bueno. peace.

-Pointy_O

P.S. You just had to mention Manolo Blahniks, didn't you? Geez, I want a pair so bad...
C.Sabbadin
2007-07-14
ch 1,
abuse"The girl broke into a flat out run, teetering precariously on the thing stiletto heels."

The...thing stiletto heels?

THe ending was weird (sort of funny;I snickered) but still horror is for death so stick to it (even if the genre is horror/humor.)
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