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| Slightly Spazztic 2008-07-18 ch 1, | abuseMygod. I like that SO much. Dark humour... I thought she was going to be face to face with murderers/rapists/vampires/hobos...instead -- Girlscouts! Love it! |
| -undergroundlove 2008-06-25 ch 1, | abuseaha! this is hilarious!! XDD i was expecting...yeah...XD!! |
| TragedyinComedy 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusehaha i loved it! totally a surprise ending bet your class loved it! |
| krazed.hypa.ivii 2008-01-30 ch 1, | abuseAHAHAHAH that is pure hilarity but dont make fun of those cookies. theyre good. i just bought some a coupla days ago ]: ahahah :] added you onto all my faves and alerts! :] |
| sunshinexx 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseomg. hilarious! oh and im glad you started up your "once upon a one-night stand" again. =)) |
| shilly 2007-11-28 ch 1, anon. | abusehaha you got away with the last line in a class? nice work |
| Jayjack 2007-11-24 ch 1, | abusehahahaha. isn't everyone afraid of Girl Scouts? I mean why exactly? Boy Scouts are so much worse. |
| XxFallenxX 2007-10-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseHaha. That was funny, but every knows that Boy Scouts are an evil cult. The neighbor boy tied my feet together with the Devil's revese bow-tie slipknot or whatever. I couldn't get the rope off until I hopped to my house for a pair of scissors. If those boy scouts start selling cookies... I shudder to think. |
| The Cruel Irony 2007-08-12 ch 1, | abuseOh. My. Fucking. God!! Hahaha, this is halarious, Simmy! (I can call you that, right? It's alot faster than simonexsays..) I was definatly not expecting that.. I mean.. well.. Girl Scouts? They are the epitomy of evil, creepy things! I was one.. at one point.. but really, they do scare me with their little poisoned cookies and their awesome little brown vests. The coolest cult ever! *dances* But scary beyond all reason. *nods* And you mentioned an owl hooting! Well.. I have to tell you.. that was no owl. .. It was me. In a giant owl costume. Why? Because that's just how I roll. :) xox Yazzi |
| Fleeting Moment 2007-07-29 ch 1, | abuseOMG! I'm laughing my butt off! |
| deep cut 2007-07-27 ch 1, | abusehaha i was suprised by the ending, been a girl scout but i never sold cookies wat is the girl doing out so late anyway?? i mean, to sell cookies... bet her mother's gonna kill her when she gets home i liked the story though, nice twist ^^ |
| Brizlack 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseLawl. What are those girls doing out so late at night!? Do your mothers know where you are? *scolds mockingly* XD This was great. |
| bedazzled892 2007-07-18 ch 1, | abuseHaha! I can picture that happening. I used to be a girl scout myself back in the day, but those little monsters can be annoyingly persistent. Nevermind the fact that the little buggers are so angelic looking in the first place. I love children, but frankly, sometimes they scare the shit out of me. Little ankle biters. Back to the point, the story was great! -Sarah |
| Pointy Objects 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuseHaha, I like that. Most stories that you read, you're supposed to generally forget about everything around you and just focus on the words. But I think if you're reading GOOD writing, then you can do both. Like when you went on about your character hearing her pulse in her ears, I could hear my pulse in my ears. And now i'm listening for them, and nothing's happening. MUy Bueno. peace. -Pointy_O P.S. You just had to mention Manolo Blahniks, didn't you? Geez, I want a pair so bad... |
| C.Sabbadin 2007-07-14 ch 1, | abuse"The girl broke into a flat out run, teetering precariously on the thing stiletto heels." The...thing stiletto heels? THe ending was weird (sort of funny;I snickered) but still horror is for death so stick to it (even if the genre is horror/humor.) |