Hope you update soon, loving it.

Poor Wynne...so easily manipulated...i hope Reed and Brennan's dick fall off...

excellent work! can't wait for the next update!

this is really good! lotsa drama, backstabbing, angst and crazy love! hope to read more soon!

ur faithful fan!

Dang it, no one ever listens to the crazy kid. ^_~

Poor Wynn.

Livi

I'm sorry I didn't sign in, I didn't really have time. But I'm glad there is another great story by you! This one is just as vivid as Band and just like with Band, I can't wait for the next update!

wow, **...Reed I mean, but then again, with the way he treated Oberon, Wynn's not that much better at this point. Brennan is a bit nasty too isn't he, well, well, well, intrigue.

Huh, Oberon was interesting in this chapter. And Reed was rather . . . evil. The quote fit his actions well. Huh, I wonder what he would've done if Brennan was the type for whom smoking is a deal-breaker.

Livi

I think your brain would look great with chartreuse and bistre paint. It'll be all mint chocolate ice cream-y.

I realy don't like Reed and Brennan. And Oberon reminds me of Moss, lol.

Rock on!

Lovely! But Reed's an **, among other things. Poor Oberon!

Gosh, I love Wynn's tactic for getting rid of Oberon. That was really cute.

Livi

The ending didn't seem forced, it actually was really cute, and probably what I would do in that type of happy situation, lol. Awsome job, poor Oberon, though...He never saw it coming...

You've got a nice set-up - I particularly like the touch of the fairy tale line beginnings. However, the chapters could be longer.

Livi

Wot wot? A tutor he says? M little gears are cranking.

And for some reason, don't kill me, the situation of the tables being arranged reminds me of High School Musical (gag, Zac Efron, gag) on how the theatre populars are separated from the jock populars. Hm.

Still, LURVE.

:t:ackles story:: Obi! I lurve you Obi!

His middle name should be Juan. So it would be Oberon Juan. And then I can call him Obi Juan. Heheh.

Lurve lurve lurve.

I just started reading and I'm already in love with it. Your characters are fun so early in the story, it's just awsome. I cannot wait for you next update!