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| twilightqueen16 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseAw so cute it reminds me of my me and my best friend *except the fall in love part |
| MiddiVampira 2008-06-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was sweet, but I LOVED it, Rani and Danny. Lol the whole spider thing made me laugh and then the ice-cream bit. Wonderfully written. Middi~ |
| sanzo-reload 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseYeah, I agree... This is like the sweetest thing that you've ever written! I wish it's longer.. Don't you ever think you can write this i multiple chapters? I mean, Danny and Rani seem like good characters! |
| yeppas- 2008-06-06 ch 1, anon. | abuseOH MY GOODNESS (eyes widen) MY GOODNESS! that, omgsh. amazing! that was so sweet i thought i wudv died from like sugar overdose.. bahaha :L anyways that was beautiful! |
| Smiling Serenade 2008-06-04 ch 1, | abuseDefinitely very, very sweet. Lots of fluff. Loved reading it! |
| TheGeekGirl 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseI like this story! It's realistic and sweet...Makes me smile. |
| IndigoAzucena 2008-05-25 ch 1, | abuseso. sweet. homigod. but perfect at the same time :] |
| Sisterhood-Productions 2008-05-24 ch 1, | abuseaw! so cute! luved it! -AMBER |
| blacksunflower 2008-05-22 ch 1, | abuseI loved this, it's amazing!! ;D It's so sweet that I started crying at the end, lol~ I shall re-review when I have more time [[I need to sleep so I don't fail finals DX]] |
| berf 2008-05-21 ch 1, | abuseThat was so, so great. Definitely one of the cutest stories i've read in a while. The characters are well-defined and believable. Really awesome job! |
| centenarian 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseAw, man. Sweet. I feel tears stinging in my eyes. It's good, really good. Keep it up. |
| DuchessYappingDog 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abuseUgh. This is too cute. Hahahaha, NOW I REALLY WANT A BOYFRIEND. Damn. Hahahaha. |
| The Professionals 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseWow...that was really good! It's like just the right amount of cuteness/sweetness and practicality! |
| snowdance-lyghtning 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseAw! Serves Kendal right to be congratulated because this is a great story. I love it because it's one of those "Monica & Chandler" (like from the TV show "Friends") stories where the two best friends fall for each other. PS: I bet the homeless shelter has a ton of questions. |
| wistfulpearl 2008-04-20 ch 1, | abuseAww, I loved it! It's so cute :) |