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| PocoSnow15 2007-07-30 ch 1,  | abuseOh wow. This sounds very similar to something in my life right now. It's really amazing. I love how your words flow. Great job! |
| XxBlackChaosxX 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseJust so you know, 'sease' is spelled cease. The poem itself had scattered feelings, extra words, and meanings. I felt myself really distracted from all the extra when I was reading, and at times I was even confused. |
| Ollie B 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseFor some reason, I'm more used to more descriptive poems, but really, the most important line is the one that begins with "For you know..." Good writing, keep it coming. |
| concerto49 2007-07-15 ch 1, | abuseIt's good to hold onto your views and stay that way. Even if it's love. Even if it's bad. |