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SpeedingCars8 2007-07-15 . chapter 1
i like it. the only thing i would change (but you're not going to lol) is the last sentence because i just always thought it flowed better if it was "You just have to listen." but it's fine the way it is because it says the same thing. Anyway, good job lol.
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