 Wolf Wonderer 2007-07-18 . chapter 4I liked your ending Haiku, worked good you didn't put in the thing you needed to say. |
 SpeedingCars8 2007-07-15 . chapter 4i like this one. there isn't much to say about haikus. it's either you like them or you don't. but i like it. lol |
 SpeedingCars8 2007-07-15 . chapter 3i like the first line the best because i like dew drops lol. |
 SpeedingCars8 2007-07-15 . chapter 2i'd like someone to whisper into my heart, really lol. i like the last line the best. |
 SpeedingCars8 2007-07-15 . chapter 1the first time i read this at your house, it made me laugh just because i immediately like pictured someone standing there with a knife through their heart going "WTF??" lol
good job. |