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burning in effigy 2009-01-17 . chapter 1
oh.. love it when people who usually write poems write something longer; always interesting to see how their writing style translates into fiction

and i have to say, you should seriously write more stuff like this. (i personally am not very good at translating flow and a storyline into actual sentences, and this piece made me happy)

short little story, but very lovely and the end (your ending's are always subtly final but also add a kind of a spin.

great drabble :]
concerto49 2007-07-16 . chapter 1
Sometimes, it doesn't have to be a long time to feel long. And other times you feel like it only happened the other day.

It's hard being a minority, and minority influences the majority, and is often the driving force to the change in society today. Don't give up! Do what you think is right.

It wasn't so much torture I thought - it was an experience - a memorable experience.

Cheers!
SpeedingCars8 2007-07-15 . chapter 1
this reminds me of a show or movie or something. it's sad but i knew that would happen at the end. me and israel aren't lesbians lol but that's sort of what happened in that situation with me having to say no because i found mike, etc.

it's not quite happening with the mike thing. although things changed AGAIN this past weekend. but whatever.

i liked this one a lot. lol
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