Reviews for Little Red Cap of Grimming Hollows

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Tobyk947 2008-06-20 ch 2,	abuseYou have to continue! You meanie. Your story's awesome, thanks!
Tobyk947 2008-06-20 ch 1,	abuseVery cute! Red foreskin? Oh. Okay. I can deal with that! ;)
Bi-curious George 2008-05-18 ch 2,	abuseAs before...review as I piss myself. "An acute memory flashed through his mind involving an ambush from a colony of fungi for accidentally attempting to eat some of their children" MWHAHAHA! HAHAHA! He's so clever! HOLD THE GOATS AT KNIFEPOINT! Cleverness. "“You are strange and ugly,” they said, “You do odd things at night.”". I. Love. You. Uh, ok. I'm gonna be a bitch and say that I thought the 'runt puppy' story was kinda shit. SORRY! I am brutally honest. But otherwise, WHY HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED THIS IN SO LONG? Do so!
Bi-curious George 2008-05-18 ch 1,	abuseOK this is so piss-myself funny that I'm going to do a review-as-you-read review. JUST FOR YOU! "Even worse was when the women began buying spells off travelling mages for “genitilia alteration.”" You are a strange, strange woman. "However, it was soon discovered that not only were his lips as red as blood, so was his foreskin. Thus, the name Little Red Cap came to be"...Simple comment: fell off chair... Hahaha! Omg! What a way to trick the Gremlin! "In some lights he was mistaken for a gothic maiden and on several occasions, accosted by pubescent lads" - SCREAMS WITH LAUGHTER! OMG! OMG! OO, Lyall and Red, SAUCEAY! I LOVE THIS! And I love you to! YAY! Next chapter...
chibibble 2008-04-05 ch 2,	abuseo.0 Uhhm...AH~! -is too scared to leave a coherent review-
chibibble 2008-04-05 ch 1,	abuse-laughs- Uhmm...Grandma's is the correct word (at the end). I love Lyall, a typically chivralous knight-type (aren't they all?) and you've parodied the stereotype of the fairytale prince enough to make me laugh for ten minutes straight... Red is a cute character, but you don't really disclose much of his nature, so I'll try and see if the second chapter is better in that respect. I must admit, I agree with you: revamped fairytales are the best. A very amusing story, and I liked the cross-reference to Snow White... Circumcised...ouchie. loveyou!
yoda 2008-03-13 ch 1, anon.	abusephwoar! awesomeness for the whole fing! booya!
CrayonMentality 2007-12-14 ch 2,	abuse“And then…” he whispered, “the runt puppy killed him.” shivers That sounds ominous...lol, this is so funny.
Jayn 2007-12-09 ch 2,	abuseI really like the way you write your characters.I like them lots. ^_^ I hope you update this story soon, even if it's just a tester.
UnknownHypocrite 2007-11-12 ch 2,	abuseVery interesting how you started putting different fairy tales together...very nice...~Me
kawaii-kitsune-thief 2007-10-19 ch 2,	abuseO.O! No stopping! D< Grar. God, your style is just so interesting, I love reading it. I'm off to read more of your work and then more scanning of fictionpress, looking for work of this quality. You're an excellent writer and I hope to see more of any of your stories soon.
Sou 2007-09-13 ch 2, anon.	abusei.. love you. dude. you are made of own. this rocks. ...drools
Sychaeus 2007-08-27 ch 2,	abusewwho! Lyall sounds psychotic ^^ Awesomness. This is like, every fairytale mixed into a pot of some kind of magical drug with other fairytales inside it, simmering in a giant cauldron of bubbling crazyness. I love it. I think there were a couple of spelling mistakes at the beginning, though i hate to be a nitpicking kind of person when im sure that by the end of this i'll have made a dozen mistakes myself. Ops. I hope the puppy story was a hint of foreshadowing. That would be cool, in the psychotic stakes, anyway. And may i say, Red's actions with the troll and the goats was so understatedly cool. flies off
bleepbloopbanana 2007-08-16 ch 2,	abuseTrying to follow this story makes my brain hurt so bad. ...in a good way. I'll never be able to read a fairytale without thinking of this now. You've completely corrupted me (not that there was much left to corrupt anyway...) I hope you're happy. -huff-
roses in bloom 2007-08-16 ch 2,	abuseYou stopped there?! Oh, that was cruel... Lovely work though! I can't wait to read the rest!

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