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| Boberick. 2008-07-19 ch 19,  | abuse:) I knew it! |
| Boberick. 2008-07-19 ch 18, | abuseYou keep putting also at the end of sentences...:groans: It's really badly placed. Sorry. 'Too' would be good. Or if you moved 'also' elsewhere. Ah well, it doesn't matter cause the story's completed now. That just bothered me a lot. |
| Boberick. 2008-07-19 ch 2, | abuseDon't like her husband. I still like Ronnie. The first chapter confused me a bit but it flows a lot better here. |
| Minxie 2008-07-16 ch 26, | abuseso is the baby really Jake's? 'Cause you didn't take the DNA test. I love the story. Great ending again... (: I can't wait to read another one of your story. Laterz. Jennifer.xx |
| Minxie 2008-07-16 ch 20, | abusethe baby better not be Brad's. I'm warning you. It better be Jake's. {o.0} Okay, i'm gonna go read the rest now. ^-^ Jennifer.xx |
| Minxie 2008-07-15 ch 3, | abuse“This is a reporter from the local tabloid. I was wondering if you could tell me what kind of underwear Controlled Environment wears. And is it true Ronnie goes commando?” I LOVED THAT! |
| Minxie 2008-07-15 ch 2, | abuseWhat happend betweem Jake and Iz... =( I know were gonna find out later but it still makes me sad. On another note: This story is awesome! i can't get enough of it. Well, better get back to reading. Jennifer.xx |
| Minxie 2008-07-15 ch 1, | abuseYAY! there's a sequel! i can't wait to read more! your like my favourite author {>. |
| Booklover91 2008-06-27 ch 24, anon. | abuseGosh, the end of this chapter had me about to cry. jake is so sweet. and he told her everything...*tear* |
| Booklover91 2008-06-27 ch 20, anon. | abusei KNEW she was pregnant! i'm so excited! and I'm glad she's finally getting used to the idea, i want ehr to be as excited as jake is... he's such a SWEETHEART! brad needs to be thrown under a prison somewhere! haha |
| Booklover91 2008-06-26 ch 12, | abuseargh! i'm so jealous of bella! i want a guy like Jake! and it's SO sweet when he calls her "angel", aw... i HATE brad, he such a jerk and @$$ hole...gr... |
| Booklover91 2008-06-26 ch 8, | abusehaha I htink i read that book before as well, the sentence you put in here souned familiar :] This story is great so far, but I'm getting scared because i KNOW drama is on its merry little way... |
| Booklover91 2008-06-26 ch 5, | abuseI'm SO upset that jake and Iz aren't together right now, but i cheated so I see that they do end up together..hehehe I don't like brad at all, he needs to be, ugh, dealt with...haha |
| SimplySweetnSour 2008-06-20 ch 1, | abusei like this chapter although i'm not sure what the direction of this story is. is the rest of the story just going to be jake and izzy's relationships going through complications? |
| Maria Gracia 2008-06-06 ch 25, | abuseI can be grateful enough for whoever had your stories on their favorite list, otherwise I would have never found them. I have never been happier going to Burger King in my life... A friend just drop me off... We went to eat and well... BK seemed like THE place to go -smiles-... I cant thank you enough for writing this... I cried, I laugh, but most importantely it helped me... Its been a while but I got heart-broken... and this... helped me... Its kind of therapy... -smile- Well... enough of MG´s rambling... Whoever reads this story, is my friend, because its not only about love, but about friendships, and perseverance... about sticking to things... and even if life is pretty crappy that just makes the better times more appretiated... MG, or Maria Gracia... |