This was a good happily ever after! Thanks for sharing.

I think it's nice to see Isabella fighting back. She was too squirmy in the beginning.

Again, I like your stories... but I think you really need to pace the plots a bit better, you need to build them up more rather than having lots of filler and quick one-two big actions that don't necessarily go very far. I also think Iz's parents' reactions are done too simply to cater to her, people's opinions don't fall in line that quickly.

Also you need to work on your secondary characters, you don't need to go super in-depth but demonstrating them a bit more, rather than mentioning them will put them in better form. Brad ought to more dimensions than a caricature of an abusive husband.

The only reason I'm even mentioning it is because I think that it's sweet and delightful series.

Thanks for listening to what I had to say! If you want me to lay off the heavy criticism, you're totally within your rights to say so too. I just wanted to be helpful.

How could Iz marry someone like that? Especially after Lance?! Oh, and I feel this coming to blows between Jake and Brad.

OK, I started this story late at night and now I won't sleep until I find out what happened to Iz and Jake!! Darn you!!

Love Jake and Iz's story, I downloaded Jake's version of events on Lulu and love that too!! Great work!!

loved it...
it ended perferctly... :)

OMG i love your Phone Calls from a rockstar series! keep up the good work! =D

aw thats so sweet!

~smurf~

I love this one so much, and that ending with the baby was beautiful, i loved it, although i was having trouble with the last few chapters before that, i think it was in between when brad says the babys his, and the wedding, i just felt that their was a loll in action and i know it cant be action all the time but that last bit dragged for me, mabye because it seemed like most things had been resolved but there was still 7 or so chapters to go. I dont think i had that problem the first time i read this though, but i now thing a great thing about this book it the unpredictability you get when when you read it fort eh first time, becasue i remember going straight from phone calls the this and being completetly shocked and upset lol :L that they werent together anymore, adn was hooked to see what happend. Of course i still enjoyed reading it again, especially to see everyone with their new lives, relationships and families.

wait. who's jenny? im SO confused. or maybe i forgot the first story XD

I DONT CARE THAT IZ CHEATED ON WHATS-HIS-FACE HE HARRASSED HIS WIFE! COME ON! I TOTALLY HATE YOU B/C JAKE AND IZ WERE SUPPOSED TO BE TOGETHER; BUT *SIGH* i know i'll forgive you because something good will happen soon huh?

good. it better because i love you and this story to death.

This was as good as the first one, it was so sweet, and showed how much Jake and Iz can get through :)

i loved it! its was so sweet
charlotte

Holy SHIT, you've heard of the U.P.

The story's good too -- seeing my home area mentioned was what made me up and review though.