|Reviews for bandaids and a birdcage|
| for shame 3/7/10 . chapter 1
this sounds almost cruel,
callous, like the speaker doesn't care
much for injured boys/girls.
but it's poetic, in all its coldness.
| tonight we bloom 8/4/09 . chapter 1
that whole thing is just fantastic. i love the first four lines the most, it's just so beautifully crafted. the metaphors throughout are excellent.
i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would really mean a lot.
| smile for the sunshine 8/18/07 . chapter 1
Creative. Original. I like it. ]
| Aquafied 7/26/07 . chapter 1
so why don't you just
all your broken teeth
like chipped china tea cups
-that is quite beautiful
| mmmmmmmm 7/15/07 . chapter 1
i love the running metaphor in this.
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/15/07 . chapter 1
Wow, very vivid imagery.
| perdita's kiss 7/15/07 . chapter 1