Reviews for bandaids and a birdcage
for shame 3/7/10 . chapter 1
this sounds almost cruel,

callous, like the speaker doesn't care

much for injured boys/girls.

but it's poetic, in all its coldness.
tonight we bloom 8/4/09 . chapter 1
that whole thing is just fantastic. i love the first four lines the most, it's just so beautifully crafted. the metaphors throughout are excellent.

i would love opinions from a talented writer like yourself on my work, it would really mean a lot.
smile for the sunshine 8/18/07 . chapter 1
Creative. Original. I like it. ]
Aquafied 7/26/07 . chapter 1
so why don't you just

swallow

all your broken teeth

like chipped china tea cups

-that is quite beautiful
mmmmmmmm 7/15/07 . chapter 1
i love the running metaphor in this.
Nobody-n-Particular 7/15/07 . chapter 1
Wow, very vivid imagery.
perdita's kiss 7/15/07 . chapter 1
wow.