 bansira 2009-08-17 . chapter 6Oh, this is interesting. I like the characters, they're all peculiar in their own way. Just Kevin isn't standing out much, but it's still the beginning, so yeah. |
 Yggdrasil Oak 2009-08-03 . chapter 6Yay for religious zealots! They make life so much more interesting! Great chapter! Can't wait for more.
P.S. Thanks... I love the name too... :) |
 K. T. Wood 2009-07-21 . chapter 6Whoa. Brian...That was cruel. The teaser at the top of the story is great. :) Update again soon. Can't wait to read about the party-- and hopefully some boy love soon. xxoo Keep up the awesome work. |
 bbyluv 2009-07-21 . chapter 6Ohh!! Party! Can't wait to see what crazy scenarios will occur...Wait I never really got how they persuaded our religious zealot to go to a party in the first place?
~bbyluv |
 K. T. Wood 2009-07-06 . chapter 5Very cute. Love the awkward cuddle. Looking forward to the next chapter. xo |
 bbyluv 2009-07-02 . chapter 5O...good chapter! The electricity was almost tangible when they fell off the bed together...so sinful! I can't wait to read more!
~bbyluv |
 infinite.silence 2009-06-30 . chapter 5i like it (:
can't wait for the next chapter. |
 Yggdrasil Oak 2009-06-30 . chapter 5I love this story! can't wait to see what happens next. |
 K. T. Wood 2009-06-26 . chapter 4Hello.
Was very excited about the update. :) Love the "maybe there's another David" line. Silly awkward boy.
Not sure that I like Brian yet... seems a bit off-- but you said that will all be explained. Hopefully I'll get to like him. (Unless you don't want me to, I'll follow wherever you write).
Love it. (sorry for short review, fingers aren't typing well at the moment, stupid fingers!)
Update again. Looking forward to it.
x |
 bbyluv 2009-06-23 . chapter 4Wow both the twins are like man-whores or something...which is kinda hilarious! It's strange how intimate they are with eachother but I can dig it...
This was absolutely great...it was hilarious yet highly interesting at the same time.
I just had an idea for this that actually happened at my high school...further on in the story when I hope our fav gay and Christian freak are getting slightly more 'together' they can totally be caught in a bathroom stall together. Okay sounds weird I know but a few years back one of my guy friends went into the only bathroom in our high school and viewed two sets of feet in one stall. Now being highly curious and forced by several other guys in the bathroom, he jumped on one of the other toilets and looked over the stall dividers to find...well lets just say a very intimate scene between two males...yep scared the snot out of him. This event has come to be known as Brokeback Bathroom...don't ask it just happened that way. What brought this thought to mind was not only was it an inappropriate scene at school (and this occurs at school) but one of the guys involved is an identical twin! (totally ridonculous, I know!) Same thing could totally happen between these two boys (okay maybe not full-on sex in the stall) and they could be caught by a teacher or something and Christian boys parents can find out creating lots and lots of drama...
Okay that was long and detailed...
Great chapter, I cannot wait to read further installments!
~bbyluv |
 Purple Above 2009-06-21 . chapter 4I wonder if David will get over his anti-gay thing and get with Jeremy! |
 ricemidget 2009-06-21 . chapter 4 great story!! can't wait to read your next update! =] |
 MasqueradeAngel 2009-06-08 . chapter 3This was an amazing chapter. I liked how you did a chapter form jeremy's pov, it was nice to get a sense of what he's thinking (very well written). Cant wait for the next chapter! |
 K. T. Wood 2009-06-08 . chapter 3Cool. Can't wait to find out more about everyone. Why doesn't Brian talk- is it going to be sad? Love it. Also- I like awkward situation, can't wait. x |
 bbyluv 2009-06-08 . chapter 3This sounds like it will be a very interesting story...I cannot wait to read more!! I just love how shy David is and the fact that his devout christian self got stuck with a gay guy as a roommate...although there is absolutely nothing wrong with people being gay because one of my close friends is a lesbian... Anywho can't wait until the next chapter!
~bbyluv |