Beautiful. Simply beautiful. You're a great writer...a wonderful painter with words.

I love this! I think it would be great as some old, roaring 20's song...complete with glittering dresses and bootleggers.:)

I absouletly love this. I am writer and a singer too and I can completely relate. Words teach you but music mends your emotion (or feeds them). I agree. You can't have one without the other. I like both in my life.

*adds to favs*

it's been a long while since i've reviewed anything on this website, here goes.

this purposely disjointed style of poetry has always been a favorite of mine, being a more solid writer of prose. I love the interchangeability between music and lyrics and emotion, excellent entanglement.

i have a soft spot for this. i'm a singer and a writer, so the mix of the two has always fascinated me. i like the narrative style, too.

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