This was simple and well written.
"I thought that you were the one,
but I'm sorry,
that I wasn't the one for you."
-Aw sad :(
Good poem!

Sorry for your break-up, but it's nice that you were able to produce this poem from your feelings - which by they way you expressed very well.

Nice work with this.

wow...i can relate to that so much! i know exactly how you feel because the same things ran through my head when i had my brake up with the love of my life...i just never actually wrote it down but i thnk i did tell him about it but haha..it sucked so bad...-hugs- i'm glad your over it :] and i'msorry you had to go through it.

It's so sad!
I undestand the complexity of it all though... I mean how she's sorry but not sorry. I feel proud that I can actually relate. =]

That's so sad-- but I like how honest it is. When people break up, everyone always views the dumpee as the victim, when sometimes it's the dumper who's more hurt by what happened. Great poem!

Very heart-felt and thoughtfully written. I really like the originality put in this. Keep writing! :) -Sara

Wow. I can really relate to this one. Or at least, at one point I did. Great job and keep writing!

Good poem. I like it. It's sad though.

~Twilight Starr~

Why were you sorry? I just think breaking up, well things happen. Love is biased and selfish. It's not really right or wrong. You just did what you felt was right. I don't know. Yeah, you could write sorry many times, yet might not be meaningful, or it could only be there once and makes lots of meaning. Anyways. I'm sorry too now.

That's a very sweet poem, I enjoyed it. You should have sent it though!

that was heart breaking! but it was good
I hope you get over it some day and find the heart to move on
as they say "forgive and forget but never live and regret"

hi! I really liked your poem..especially the part when you said "and for that I'm thankful.." I kind of went through the same situation and after the whole thing your "thankful..." Your poem really shows how mature you handled the relationship and that "you'll always remember" him...Unlike the people who curse out their first love and spread rumors about them...=) I like!