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| Reviews for Why Am I Attracted To This? |
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  amy 8/13/12 . chapter 1 this chapter was sooo interesting, i was lookking foward to the rest. |
 anabanana05random 6/9/11 . chapter 3hey! i know its real late since your already finished and all, but i noticed in your story the way the characters speak? it changes from posh/ old school to slang/ normal everyday! rg "speak of this to no one" and the "...around her okay" it doesnt read smoothly or easily... which makes it difficult to read! sorry im not very articulate but i try! lols good story |
| sweetpea265 4/1/11 . chapter 8 I'm really liking this story! Always love a good bit of intrigue. It seems that you may want to work on separating the story with a line of stars or something when the scene changes though. This is at least the second time I've noticed the scene change without a break letting the reader know and I had to re-read a few lines because I thought I had missed something. Anyway, other than that I'm really liking it, and can't wait to read the rest. :) |
| RenaeJoy 2/23/11 . chapter 33 OH MY GOSH! THIS BOOK IS AMAZING! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! GREAT BOOK BY GREAT WRITER SAYS I! God Bless xx E.M |
| Daiseyyy 7/20/10 . chapter 33 Yes, you should make a sequel. Love the mystery with her finding out about who killed her father and stuff like that. You did a freaking AWESOME job. I really like it. I read this story in one whole day. You don't understand how much my butt hurts right now for just sitting for hours reading this outstanding story. Really loved it. Hope to read more of your story. |
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| ilikeeunicorns 5/15/10 . chapter 3 This story is really not making a lot of sense to me. If you are going to change the scene then make a smooth transition! Your grammar is also wrong and it's very annoying! |
| ilikeeunicorns 5/12/10 . chapter 1 Reg is an interesting character but you make it seem like her best friends were perfect. Your sentences at the beginning were kind of choppy and I hate how you used 'cell' without the 'phone'. Try to make your sentences flow and create a picture in a reader's mind if you (you most likely will) decide to write another story. |
| RoseLife 5/9/10 . chapter 33 Omg ! This was a heaps awesome story! ONE QUESTION where did they go for the honeymoon? And I LOL'd when in his last letter to reg, he dad put ":D" at the end TEHEE ANYWAYS loved it didn't understand the title till now but it makes so much sense all done ! |
| applenica 4/3/10 . chapter 33 hee...he...finally the ending. this is the first story that i comment every chapter so you got more reviews. please write the sequel maybe about reg and drew after the wedding. see you soon |
| applenica 4/3/10 . chapter 32 finally i know the secret behind the arrangement. wedding bell soon. |
| applenica 4/3/10 . chapter 31 i'm so happy that aidan propose cate. so double wedding then? |
| applenica 4/3/10 . chapter 30 finally they got arrested. i hope drew can catch up reg. |
| applenica 4/2/10 . chapter 29 your idea is so great. |
| applenica 4/2/10 . chapter 28 puzzles...why? make me curious |
