Reviews for The Masked are Blind

Reviews For: The Masked are Blind

Sweet Lemon Effect 2008-03-30 ch 1,	abuseAww, I love Emile! I hope you continue this. It's very good.
moments-of-euphoria 2007-08-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseI love the plotline so far! You've got a great hook, (not as in Captain) and every chapter leaves you wanting to read more. Maybe Laina's vocabulary is too... developed. Though she is fifteen, it doesn't seem that she's had education enough to use some of the words that she does. And she doesn't seem the type to talk to people regularly about topics in which words like "conspiring" would be used. Altogether: intriguing. Post more. And SOON!
Your New Aesthetic 2007-07-25 ch 3,	abuseHello! It's me again :) Good chapter. Sort of short though, but it was good. I still want to see where it's all going, and I'm excited for the next chapter :) Keep it up! Aesthetic
Death Walks Alone 2007-07-23 ch 3,	abuseYay for freaks! does freak dance That's slightly stranger-looking than I had thought...good chapter. Way to go Liana! You tell 'em! And the cook likes her, that's a good touch.
ohthevoices 2007-07-23 ch 3,	abuseOverreact about dreams, much, Mrs. Caldwell? So did she leave the room when that whole exchange with the cook was going on? That was a little confusing, you might want to make that clearer. Yay, I love adventures! =)
Mslotr 2007-07-23 ch 3, anon.	abuseI had a whole nice review written out for chapter two, but the internet was mean and decided to abandon me when I tried to submit it. Now I don't remember what I had wrote. Sorry. The story is looking great!
Your New Aesthetic 2007-07-20 ch 2,	abuseI, again, enjoyed it quite a bit. Keep updating ! I'm hooked, and I really wanna see we're it's going ! Aesthetic
Death Walks Alone 2007-07-20 ch 2,	abuseA smooth ride...supressed laugh Good chapter! In particular (since it was most of the chapter...oddly) the little, um, dream thingy at the end. Bravo!
ohthevoices 2007-07-19 ch 2,	abuseSo was it actual concern, or was Mrs. Caldwell just worried about how productive Laina would be in such a state? I can't wait to see what comes of this vision!
ohthevoices 2007-07-19 ch 1,	abuseBrilliant opening. The background on Laina here is so interesting I can't wait to see how this character fits into the story. You described everything beautifully.
Your New Aesthetic 2007-07-17 ch 1,	abuseVery good beginning. You give just enough information to make me what to keep checking back to see if you've written more. In the first paragraph was the only place I picked out a mistake, and it's so teensy weensy it's almost not worth mentioning; your 'she' wasn't capatalized. Yup, that's it. Congrats on writing flawlessly, something I can definatly not do. Anywho, it was really really good. I love how you gave just that little tiny bit of background, enough to make you wanna learn more and more and more. Did I already say that? I think I did, but it's just so intriguing I can't stop saying it, hehe. Oh, and I like the last line, the one about her wearing her heart on her sleeve. Guines. Also, kudos on the disfigured main character. Lots of people can't written a story focused on a girl unless she's almighty and gorgeous. Update soon! Can't wait to read more. Seriously, I can't. Really :)
Death Walks Alone 2007-07-16 ch 1,	abuseTold you all I had say, this is mostly to tell you that I have read this chapter, which I like. claps Bravo. Oh, and I like mask.
Mslotr 2007-07-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseI hope you pursue this idea. I want to see where it leads to. Was Laina born with the disfigurements or not? I mean, the eye? It seems that the other ones arn't naturally there. Then again, I could be wrong . . .

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