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| Hemlock 2007-10-11 ch 1,  | abuseTrue, too true. You create your own prisons and don't want to escape from the illusion that is not real. |
| wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI have to applaud you for making a poem that has the allusion of a zoo being so well-done. really, nicely done. |
| crazy dog events 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseThe rhyme in the second stanza seems out of place/contrived, and the last line of that stanza is really awkward. Other than that I quite like it. Actually, it's something to which I can really relate. |
| Tytherpol 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abusetrue observation |
| concerto49 2007-07-16 ch 1, | abuseReminds me that someone asked me if you dream in first person or third person. A teacher also asked if we dream in color. And what do we dream? Apparently dreams are random images from our minds that lack meaning. I wonder. |