 krabby patties. 2009-05-27 . chapter 1That was so swet. I love you? |
 B-Dooliie 2009-05-18 . chapter 1i love this. its so creative, the way you wrote it. and no grammer mistakes that i could spot! yay!
do you think you'd ever do a full length story based on this? that would be so cool. |
 entity.unkown 2009-04-22 . chapter 1i like your writing. it flows really well :] |
 Cynthian 2009-04-16 . chapter 1ahh. very, very cute. (: |
 victoriai434 2009-04-15 . chapter 1God! your stories are so good!
I love them... this one almost made me cry! |
 KarmaC 2009-03-24 . chapter 1This is a fantastic little one-shot. I absolutely adored the parallel structure. It fit the plot really well. |
 crazykindawonderful 2009-03-08 . chapter 1-sigh-
Beautiful .. |
 Juliet 2009-01-23 . chapter 1 For some reason this made me want to cry. It was just so honest and...human that it makes you want to cry and never stop. It's so beautiful I can't even put it into words. Amazing job.
-Juliet- |
 Jainblu 2009-01-14 . chapter 1this is an assignment?
it's really sweet.
I enjoyed reading it, i loved that the paragraphs reflected eachother.. like in the differences they had there was a kind of similarity.. then the way the final paragraph concluded that was made clear!
Yeah.
Also I hope you're feeling better. |
 Ally-Marty 2009-01-12 . chapter 1 This is so pretty! I really like it. :D |
 madder red 2008-10-21 . chapter 1accursed girl..? assignments..? I don't get..
but it was still a great read thought I think you're better at writing longer chapters complete with descriptions, dialogue and what else, somehow minimalism doesn't really suit you o.o but thanks! |
 NationChild 2008-07-04 . chapter 1I like the way you alternated telling each of their stories. That emphasizes how different they are from each other. |
 Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-03-24 . chapter 1I like this, its nice. |
 justalilcrazy 2008-03-10 . chapter 1This was truly wonderful! I love the ending! |
 DMLpacker 2008-03-01 . chapter 1Oh I like this style a lot. It flows so beautifully like a poem ;) |