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NationChild
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abuseI like the way you alternated telling each of their stories. That emphasizes how different they are from each other.
Beyond-the-Shadows
2008-03-24
ch 1,
abuseI like this, its nice.
justalilcrazy
2008-03-10
ch 1,
abuseThis was truly wonderful! I love the ending!
lilylupin7
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuseOh I like this style a lot. It flows so beautifully like a poem ;)
j.c-chic
2008-02-12
ch 1,
abuseomgosh that is so well-written! kudos to you!! u rock my world lol
SillyOme
2008-02-10
ch 1,
abusei really like this short story, its different and definitely unique. where can i get these assignments too?
BlackPetal
2007-11-14
ch 1,
abuseAw, how cute.
crissy
2007-10-31
ch 1,
abusei really enjoyed that. the structure and the concise quality of the descriptions are engaging. i liked the comparisons of their lives and the insular qualities they share. and i just love the word kinetic, which is silly but it still makes this better for me.
pasify
2007-10-18
ch 1,
abuseIt's me again! I love it! Nice...! Write more! Hahhaa...
x3life
2007-10-16
ch 1,
abuseaww this was such a cute story!! =]
chocolatechipash
2007-10-01
ch 1,
abuseoh wow, beautifully written. ur always very descriptive and mention little small things which makes ur stories engaging and believable, thank you.
ree
2007-09-19
ch 1, anon.
abuseso far, so good! hope you update soon!
luv me like no other
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseAw, this is so beautiful. I am totally in love with this.
kate
2007-08-24
ch 1, anon.
abusei really enjoyed this story. i love how you approached an idea that not everyone thinks about on a daily basis, and made it a beautifully written piece of prose. thank you for that :)
jekodama
2007-08-06
ch 1,
abuseOh, pretty! I liked it a lot, and my friend Jonathan (who is hearing impaired) loved it.
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