That was so swet. I love you?

i love this. its so creative, the way you wrote it. and no grammer mistakes that i could spot! yay!
do you think you'd ever do a full length story based on this? that would be so cool.

i like your writing. it flows really well :]

ahh. very, very cute. (:

God! your stories are so good!
I love them... this one almost made me cry!

This is a fantastic little one-shot. I absolutely adored the parallel structure. It fit the plot really well.

-sigh-


Beautiful ..

For some reason this made me want to cry. It was just so honest and...human that it makes you want to cry and never stop. It's so beautiful I can't even put it into words. Amazing job.

-Juliet-

this is an assignment?
it's really sweet.
I enjoyed reading it, i loved that the paragraphs reflected eachother.. like in the differences they had there was a kind of similarity.. then the way the final paragraph concluded that was made clear!
Yeah.
Also I hope you're feeling better.

This is so pretty! I really like it. :D

accursed girl..? assignments..? I don't get..

but it was still a great read thought I think you're better at writing longer chapters complete with descriptions, dialogue and what else, somehow minimalism doesn't really suit you o.o but thanks!

I like the way you alternated telling each of their stories. That emphasizes how different they are from each other.

I like this, its nice.

This was truly wonderful! I love the ending!

Oh I like this style a lot. It flows so beautifully like a poem ;)