|Reviews for Kinetic Poetry|
| watercolour dreams 6/19/10 . chapter 1
Wow. This was beautiful. I absolutely love your writing. Great story!
| artofjula 5/27/09 . chapter 1
That was so swet. I love you?
| B-Dooliie 5/18/09 . chapter 1
i love this. its so creative, the way you wrote it. and no grammer mistakes that i could spot! yay!
do you think you'd ever do a full length story based on this? that would be so cool.
| entity.unkown 4/22/09 . chapter 1
i like your writing. it flows really well :]
| Cynthian 4/16/09 . chapter 1
ahh. very, very cute. (:
| victoriai434 4/15/09 . chapter 1
God! your stories are so good!
I love them... this one almost made me cry!
| KarmaC 3/24/09 . chapter 1
This is a fantastic little one-shot. I absolutely adored the parallel structure. It fit the plot really well.
| beautiful.imperfection 3/8/09 . chapter 1
| Juliet 1/23/09 . chapter 1
For some reason this made me want to cry. It was just so honest and...human that it makes you want to cry and never stop. It's so beautiful I can't even put it into words. Amazing job.
| Jainblu 1/14/09 . chapter 1
this is an assignment?
it's really sweet.
I enjoyed reading it, i loved that the paragraphs reflected eachother.. like in the differences they had there was a kind of similarity.. then the way the final paragraph concluded that was made clear!
Also I hope you're feeling better.
| Ally-Marty 1/12/09 . chapter 1
This is so pretty! I really like it. :D
| madder red 10/21/08 . chapter 1
accursed girl..? assignments..? I don't get..
but it was still a great read thought I think you're better at writing longer chapters complete with descriptions, dialogue and what else, somehow minimalism doesn't really suit you o.o but thanks!
| NationChild 7/4/08 . chapter 1
I like the way you alternated telling each of their stories. That emphasizes how different they are from each other.
| emilybh 3/24/08 . chapter 1
I like this, its nice.
| justalilcrazy 3/10/08 . chapter 1
This was truly wonderful! I love the ending!