| Reviews for Kinetic Poetry |
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watercolour dreams 6/19/10 . chapter 1Wow. This was beautiful. I absolutely love your writing. Great story! |
artofjula 5/27/09 . chapter 1That was so swet. I love you? |
B-Dooliie 5/18/09 . chapter 1i love this. its so creative, the way you wrote it. and no grammer mistakes that i could spot! yay! do you think you'd ever do a full length story based on this? that would be so cool. |
entity.unkown 4/22/09 . chapter 1i like your writing. it flows really well :] |
Cynthian 4/16/09 . chapter 1ahh. very, very cute. (: |
victoriai434 4/15/09 . chapter 1God! your stories are so good! I love them... this one almost made me cry! |
KarmaC 3/24/09 . chapter 1This is a fantastic little one-shot. I absolutely adored the parallel structure. It fit the plot really well. |
beautiful.imperfection 3/8/09 . chapter 1-sigh- Beautiful .. |
Juliet 1/23/09 . chapter 1 For some reason this made me want to cry. It was just so honest and...human that it makes you want to cry and never stop. It's so beautiful I can't even put it into words. Amazing job. -Juliet- |
Jainblu 1/14/09 . chapter 1this is an assignment? it's really sweet. I enjoyed reading it, i loved that the paragraphs reflected eachother.. like in the differences they had there was a kind of similarity.. then the way the final paragraph concluded that was made clear! Yeah. Also I hope you're feeling better. |
Ally-Marty 1/12/09 . chapter 1 This is so pretty! I really like it. :D |
madder red 10/21/08 . chapter 1accursed girl..? assignments..? I don't get.. but it was still a great read thought I think you're better at writing longer chapters complete with descriptions, dialogue and what else, somehow minimalism doesn't really suit you o.o but thanks! |
NationChild 7/4/08 . chapter 1I like the way you alternated telling each of their stories. That emphasizes how different they are from each other. |
emilybh 3/24/08 . chapter 1I like this, its nice. |
justalilcrazy 3/10/08 . chapter 1This was truly wonderful! I love the ending! |