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| NationChild 2008-07-04 ch 1,  | abuseI like the way you alternated telling each of their stories. That emphasizes how different they are from each other. |
| Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI like this, its nice. |
| justalilcrazy 2008-03-10 ch 1, | abuseThis was truly wonderful! I love the ending! |
| lilylupin7 2008-03-01 ch 1, | abuseOh I like this style a lot. It flows so beautifully like a poem ;) |
| j.c-chic 2008-02-12 ch 1, | abuseomgosh that is so well-written! kudos to you!! u rock my world lol |
| SillyOme 2008-02-10 ch 1, | abusei really like this short story, its different and definitely unique. where can i get these assignments too? |
| BlackPetal 2007-11-14 ch 1, | abuseAw, how cute. |
| crissy 2007-10-31 ch 1, | abusei really enjoyed that. the structure and the concise quality of the descriptions are engaging. i liked the comparisons of their lives and the insular qualities they share. and i just love the word kinetic, which is silly but it still makes this better for me. |
| pasify 2007-10-18 ch 1, | abuseIt's me again! I love it! Nice...! Write more! Hahhaa... |
| x3life 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abuseaww this was such a cute story!! =] |
| chocolatechipash 2007-10-01 ch 1, | abuseoh wow, beautifully written. ur always very descriptive and mention little small things which makes ur stories engaging and believable, thank you. |
| ree 2007-09-19 ch 1, anon. | abuseso far, so good! hope you update soon! |
| luv me like no other 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is so beautiful. I am totally in love with this. |
| kate 2007-08-24 ch 1, anon. | abusei really enjoyed this story. i love how you approached an idea that not everyone thinks about on a daily basis, and made it a beautifully written piece of prose. thank you for that :) |
| jekodama 2007-08-06 ch 1, | abuseOh, pretty! I liked it a lot, and my friend Jonathan (who is hearing impaired) loved it. |