 Abbigail Cross 2009-04-18 . chapter 1Oh wow. BUM-MER! Great!!
-RB |
 LONELYxTAG 2007-09-13 . chapter 1I WAS SO THERE!
AHH SO GOOD I LOVE YOU! |
 Dokuhime.Kobura 2007-07-17 . chapter 1i liked it...i feel bad for kelso...my boyfriend still calls me -his- sweetheart and it doesnt mean he's cheating... |
 lollipops.talk.to.me 2007-07-16 . chapter 1...
excuse me.
why wasn't this sent to me?!?! i can tell it's real, ain't it?!?! but was auzzy the one who actually typed.
i am mad i didn't get this first. because it was adorably kind of funny. she called YOU a **? haha that's funny. |
 waterlemons 2007-07-16 . chapter 1I think it's okay but I was a bit confused with all the chatting. I think it would be better if it wasn't all AOL/AIM/MSN format. I don't think stories with mostly online chatting are allowed on fictionpress anyways. But the plot seems okay. Happy Summer!
Sophie |