Wowee. What a story.

I loved all the unique, strange imagery. Especially the quirky Gondola Grey. Not only was I absorbed in this story from start to finish, but I literally felt a pang in my stomach when Gondola realized his teeth were falling out.

That. Was beautiful.

I really enjoyed this piece. Honestly, I only read it because it sounded oddly familiar to Johnny the Homicidal Maniac and I was planning to point that out, but once I actually read it...it was nothing like JTHM. Anyway, you're style is really unique. Love the names of the characters and such. Please don't read any of my stories...they're pathetic compared to yours. I guess I should work on that. Consider yourself my competition? yeah.