|Reviews for My Friend, The Paper|
| Tekla 1/8/09 . chapter 1
Interesting! Oh so interesting!
I know it's probably intentionally vague at the beginning (i.e. what you're screaming all out loud), but it'd help if you gave a more specific vague. [does that even make sense? o_O]
A bit repetitive about the listening - maybe if you found a synonym of "listen"?
I feel this way about my writing, too, so it's awesome that it's this easy to relate to it. (Can you tell that's one of my big issues with writing? haha.)