Interesting! Oh so interesting!

I know it's probably intentionally vague at the beginning (i.e. what you're screaming all out loud), but it'd help if you gave a more specific vague. [does that even make sense? o_O]

A bit repetitive about the listening - maybe if you found a synonym of "listen"?

I feel this way about my writing, too, so it's awesome that it's this easy to relate to it. (Can you tell that's one of my big issues with writing? haha.)

-_-

Sheriff