I really like this. I read To the Bone, but I felt bad for Devon because Craig was mean to him. I like how he got his revenge. XDD Dark stories are nice. You could've just put both stories together, as in two chapters. I think some people are too lazy to look up the first story when they see a sequel which means they don't even bother to read it. Anyway, I really like this. Love Devon, he's just a character you can get attatched too, ya know? ;)

"We've established that." That is so something that always comes up when I fight with a friend of mine. I call him an asshole and he always replies with that. xD

Cool. I like the end and I like how he didn't shoot himself. o.o

And even cooler that you even wrote this. :) Follow-up stories are always nice...especially when the one before that was so twisted. D:

Travis annoyed the hell out of me, though. xD

xo

WHYHAVEN'TIREADTHISYET?!
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WHAT FAGGOTRY IS THIS?!


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Anyways, I love it~! x'D
Of course I love it, psh.
I love everything you write...*mumble mulbe*
*rolls away*