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| lex 2007-08-08 ch 1, anon. | abuselol awesome i lik it |
| alirider827 2007-07-25 ch 1,  | abusei liked the imagery you gave in this of the chase- the sirens, the police. the song made me laugh in an evil "** you structure!!" kind of way. nice job =) |
| Bob Evans 2007-07-23 ch 1, | abuseOkay, I was originally planning on reading "Untiled WarAction Story" first, but this one caught my eye, and I felt it would be innapropriate of me to read and not leave a review. I'm not sure if you inteded for this to be a song, but I have to tell you it would make one awesome one. Excellent work on the ryhming, too. ~Bob Evans |
| Wolf's Night 2007-07-20 ch 1, | abuseanother awsome poem/song/lyric thingy! Tho I am starting to worry bout u I mean jeez whats up with all the swearing and rebellious junk? you need to stop watching those Die Hard movies (unless u invite me of course :P) They give ur little head too much to think about. |