Reviews for Of Proud Spirits and Losses at Night

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MZ PEACHESZZ 2008-03-30 ch 11,	abuseI dont understand how she could be with child if they haven't had sex...did I just gloss over that? I thought they just kissed!
siddika 2007-09-15 ch 1,	abuseAmazing job.
crazyfish666 2007-09-06 ch 29,	abuseI love it, very nice! I had been worried it would be too similar to Titanic (the movie) but it is not at all. A few typos still exist, at one point you say "the survivors of the Carpathia" and later you say "the Jane" and "the Hannah" but other than that I cannot fault it.
Georgiana 2007-08-30 ch 29,	abuseI think you ended it nicely, although it is a great comfort to know that there will be more..hehe:) Ah... They are just so perfect for each other...=) It was a really sweet ending, but I think they deserved that, after so much they had to go through... Thanks for the shout out, and I must say, it has been so much fun reading so brilliant literature! Although I'm afraid my reviews haven't really been of much help, I hope the blabbering at least was a little encouraging...? Anyway, I will definitely be back for the sequel, so toodles, for now=D Georgiana;)
Georgiana 2007-08-30 ch 28,	abuseI think it was nice that you mentioned Lilianna's quick conclusion about William's death, and then gave her reasoning for it. It made the whole incident more believable:) I'm sorry there aren't 30 chapters, but I'm looking forward to the sequel:) So, onto the epilogue... I'm so sad it'll all be over soon...:( sobs hysterically
Brackynn 2007-08-30 ch 29,	abuseWell, all I can say is that I can't wait for the sequel! While this was a very sweet wrap-up, seeing Kayleigh and Lilianna as friends, her life with William one month on and the effects of the Titanic on their lives ... I want more! I've come quite attached to these characters, and so, must know more! Fantastic job -- truly. Keep writing!
Brackynn 2007-08-30 ch 28,	abuseI must say, this is a nice resolution -- not as in that everything's turned out perfectly, because obviously, it hasn't, but I do like the sense of closure you've left us with -- although while keeping some questions open! (Will we find out what happens in regards to Kayleigh's life in America and Lilianna and William's baby in the epilogue? I hope so!) I loved reading about all their different reactions to the Statue of Liberty as well; I thought that that was a really nice touch :) What I also found interesting about this chapter was seeing a little into Anne's perspective on her late husband. I sort of wish we'd seen a bit more of her throughout the story, as she looks like she had the potential to be a fairly interesting player in the whole dispute between William and his father and brothers. But now -- brilliant job, and so I'm onto the epilogue! :D
InkIllusionist 2007-08-29 ch 29,	abuseNo problem! I loved reading an reviewing this story and hope to do more in the future! I am alos glad you accuried SO many readers in the process! :D We all love this story! WIlliam survived! The baby's coming! There's a sequel! what could be better!?! This was truly a great story. Congrats on it! :D
InkIllusionist 2007-08-29 ch 26,	abusei hope it is william! ee .. i must see! onto the next chap
InkIllusionist 2007-08-29 ch 25,	abuseoh so many questions! I hope Will lives! I think Richard might be gone -sob- Phillip is nice from what I've seen of him. I need to see more before I make a full opnion. I hope to see him more! The baby should be 'babies' as in twins lol. a boy and girl. my fantasy haha
InkIllusionist 2007-08-29 ch 24,	abuse-lets out breath- dear god you're good at writing suspense! I was on the edge of my seat for that one! :) Excellent! He's ALIVE! -cheers- I wonder what more is in store! Hmm... lol
InkIllusionist 2007-08-29 ch 22,	abuseoh! oh! OH! he's not going to die is he?!? he needs air! Oh i do hope he makes it out alive! I know I'm not very good with constructive critism like Brackynn (who is a gramatical and technical genius) but i'll enjoy the story and give u feedback as best i can!
InkIllusionist 2007-08-29 ch 21,	abuseoh dear i wonder they have to discuss! I know I know, I've been completely MIA in the last few months! Sorry! I see you've posted a sequel! I'll work my way though these chapters and be reading that ASAP! Wonderful writing as usual! Thank you a billion for that little shout-out on your profile, although it is an honor for me to read YOUR work! It is splendid. Enough blabbering on my part. Onto the next chapter!
IheartStewart20 2007-08-29 ch 29,	abuseI have finally read this thing and it was spectacular! I was immediately pulled into the world that the Titanic existed in. You did a great job with this and I can't wait for the sequel! Kudos chica!
Rosetta S Moon 2007-08-29 ch 29,	abuseThe story was great. Can't wait for the sequel. I really want to know if the baby is a boy or girl!

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