i loved it!
Please write more soon

"Somebody just needs to massage that boy's forehead with a brick." Hilarious!
Oh boy. I do remember reading the first two chapters a long time ago, and I fell in love with Sed. But that's only because I have a thing for witty smokers with piercings:P Call me crazy.
I'm glad you found this and updated it, because it has such interesting characters and situations and dialogue; I could go on.
Write more soon, I can't wait to read it:)

Just adding you as one of my fave authors

Amazing, update soon please !!

~ Missus Finkle xx

I love the writing.

I have a crush on Sed. :)
Bad, cocky, funny boys are hot.

Hey this story is well written. I can't wait to hear more. :) You have major talent in writing, but I have to ask. Is it really THAT necessary to include all those swear words? :S

Hahaha! This story is so funny! And yes Sed is a jerk but I must admit he is hot! hehe! Anyways, please update ASAP! I want to read MORE! :)

hmm, arent all hot guys complete **? it's how they make 'em.
BUT as you said, he's hot, so who cares? and oh,I think he likes her too.
anyway cant wait for the next chapter.. so UPDATE!

you're a funny kid. i like funny kids...they write nice. you write nice. mmhm. so i looked dicksmack in the dictionary and and and it had this picture...of you! nah...jk. it didn't really. anyways, entertaining chapter. i want to bang it for hours on end...uhm, jk again, lol. XD

Great chapter. Sed sounds awful, but pretty so it's /almost/ okay x3 Update soon!

you know, i was listening to taking back sunday today...while i was showering actually...i love this song so i was intrigued by the title and well, also the first chapter. its very funny and well, i definitely relate with her on her hatred for seafood, lol. cant wait for more.

Hi this is really good! Dont tell me its a hot brother...oh. Yeh dont tell me cuz i wanna know in the next chapter! Please please please write more. Update asap!
Cant wait!

this sounds like it is gonna be really good. Can't wait for an update!
muchlove!
Pyrgusfinn

oh cliffie
gack
i like this...
UPDATE!

Great first chapter, very well written. I can't wait for the next chapter ^^