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Rightest Rachel 2008-09-18 . chapter 1
Your vocabulary in this one seems kind of elementary. I know it’s from a few years ago, but you should fix it.

I liked the way you wrote it though. It’s great philosophy, and you seem to be a moderately good advice giver.
InkySubstance 2007-10-03 . chapter 1
Really good.
anon. 2007-07-17 . chapter 1
my friend cut once... i felt awful... because i should have been there... but wasn't... when i knew they felt bad... literally felt sick to my stomach... so many things i should have said... and this story said those things...
Dapple Gray 2007-07-17 . chapter 1
I'm glad you posted this... it's... very touching, and I honestly believe that when someone reads this, it could help them, if only little. Sometimes all you need a little help. And the "not in the E.T. way" added just the right touch of humor, too. But you are right, no one is alone, sometimes we just need help seeing that. I just wanted to thank you for posting this. Thank you.
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