Oh, wow. That was amazing. I absolutely loved it. I was a tiny bit confused in the very beginning, but I figured out what was happening soon.

Really good story. I loved it. A lot. :]]

I really love this story...BUT, don't write a sequel. just leave it as it is. Also, i think that you should have left out the parts when they explain stuff like when they're being sarcastic, sound effects (pf) or when she explained about being locked away in the library. If you took out those parts it would be much better. I sound really harsh don't I? Sorry about that; i really liked the story. Do you really live in Aussie? As in Australia? That is the coolest thing- i always wanted to go there. I'm going to leave now because I'm probably being really annoying.

Maybe have a sequel. Cute story.

Twilight Starr

It's just a very heartfelt story. At the begining, it was strong, and very powerful. I cried, it just got to me (of course it helped that I was listening to a very depressing song at the time, but still...)

It continued strong. Overall, it was a very nice story, but towards the end it lost some of it's strenght, not enough for the story ot be ruined through...

But, it was very moving...

Maybe :)

This is very cute!