Hello... You don't accept anonymous (or anonymouse) reviews, so I created an FP account to do this. I hope you're happy. Oh well, maybe I have some random stuff hanging around somewhere that I can upload...

Anyway, this was brilliant. You have a career in selling cheese-flavored toothpaste. Are there different kinds of cheese? Because I'm in the market for something cheddar...

I have never heard ANYONE write an ode to toothpaste; but tis true, it's something that we completely need, I hate grimy teeth.
~ Flamingflie

You go girl :D

I LUFFED it. I sent it to ma friend and she came over and we kept singin it it was awsome. And I'm being kicked off the computer right now err but I wanted to tell you I really liked The Girl (your other story) because I feel like that when I get on stage. I could really relate to it. Update more. kk?

-ERINN