OMG...this chapter was really good! I wanna know what's gonna happen next!
(squealing really loud right now)
Okay...I'm done now.
I will be patiantly awauting for the next chapter!

~Anami Ai Keikano

Wow this story is going fast! It'll help if you made the chapters a bit longer. But anyway good concept so far!

Yay!! My cat is on my lap as I am reading this and she likes it too because she is purring and pushing the keyboard off the desk with her head. And now she is sitting on my computer tower -.-' Anyways thanks for updating and I hope to read more!

... a kind of good way to end it I guess... but it was really really short, and probably could have been longer,
like um “Decided to watch my video’s while I was gone? Those pants a bit too small for ya, chunky?” Aoi said cheerfully with his eyes closed. But when he opened them, Kaoru wasn’t there. Before he fainted in extreme shock, he remembered a few things that he had seen…

Big boobs, a small waist, sweet lips and sexy legs.

you could have added : Aoi fell backwards with widened eyes, "wh... what the-?!"

Kaoru swallowed, "Uh..." he looked at Aoi.

I mean, maybe if you were indicating that he was really a girl or something.

Or if maybe Kaoru was changing clothes real quick, and he was wearing a bra or something...? I don't know I guess.

Please continue! it does sound really good so far though!

*sigh*

Um, you didn't explain Tsuki's appearence, some readers may not exactly know what to picture thinhking of him other than their own Ideal hot gay guy.

... *heart* so? so? wha duz he look like? O_O

Omg is Kaoru a girl?! Lol update soon enjoying this so far :D

You make me feel so...HAPPY! I love your story! I haven't written one yet because...Well because I a new member! I'm gonna start on it soon though! You gave me the inspiration I needed! You have to keep writing! I'm like standing on edge, wondering what's gonna happen next! Also, I would love to see designs for your story...as an artist myself I adore seeing the other works of other artists! Once again, PLEASES CONTINUE YOUR STORY!

Ooh! Ooh! Interesting! Update soon please :D Looking forward to the next chapter, even though this was a little short ^^ I hope you have a look at my stories one day.