very good :) i feel they should be more

interesting. hm. gonna go read the sequel now.

Eh, vampires. *shivers* nasty little creatures. Good story, nasty creatures.

i really hope its not the end. its really good!

Maybe it's the fact that I am up late but- It was a good story. I got a little confused around when she woke up. It felt rushed, you need to slow it down more. Try having a little mystery surrond the whole situation. Maybe have her thoughts linger about killing Dan, a crisis of consince maybe? Good luck and great story.
Future Werewolf,
R.C. Polk

I love your stories.. its so weird becuase my name is terra. Kinda close isnt it? ^ ^ Im majorly into anime and I love drawing, and drawing comic books and writing my own stories. Its nice to see my fellow anime fan. =)

Embracing the wind~ Apterous B i r d

Good lord, you wrote this WHEN? In seventh grade? Jeez louise, that was good. I´m gonna go and check out the rest of your stories now, and add you as a favorite author! Ja ne!

Oh my gos steph, how could you write like that, give me your brain!!!! Great Job!!!! ~Chibi Steph

Oh my god!!!! I got zapped into your story steph!!! that gave my chills!! and the fact that it is 1:16 AM in the morniing only helps me be more---- not exactly scared but freacked, yea know? I love this story!! You said this was your old stlye of writing, I think it's pretty good though!! Awsome job steph, now on to the last chap!

Very good, for being written in 7th grade. Great sensory details...keep it up.

I thought the stroy rocked! It was so cool Could you some how write more. i would love to read it. I thought that the story was so intersting. I like to write but I'm not sure anyone would want to read my stuff. thank you for listening! COOL STORY!

Slam! Ok, had to do that. Ok beginning so far, but I'll need to see more before I can make a better review.

Gooooooood! Very very good!

Interesting enough beginning. A bit mechanical, I mean, this is sort of a cookie-cutter story so far. Pretty girl likes pretty boy, pretty boy dumps pretty girl. Pretty girl gets hit in the head with a baseball. Okay, so it's not quite cookie-cutter. Well, I hope the vampire stuff shows up soon. I'll be looking for an update.