Hiya x
Already read this before twas put on here.. and i still like it ^_^ only thing really is the description when the story continues, other than that nice one!
keep it up clarkey =) lol

bex xx
ooh btw have added you to me fav authors list - so i can get 2 ya stories when ya post em :)

Another good chapter my friend. A few grammar mistakes here and there but they don't take anything away from the actual story.

And I love the word Kwaange =D

Marc

I was lucky enough to read this before it was submitted here ^_^

You already know what I think of this, so there isn't a whole lot that I can say in this review. I see that you ironed out the few mistakes that I noticed first time around and I'm happy you did.

Keep up the good work and I look forward to future chapters.

Your pal, Marc (A.K.A Divine-Insanity)