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| Dreamless_Infinity 2007-08-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseI love how you’ve written this poem, your ideas were expressed eloquently and the rhyming flowed perfectly. I hope to read more of your poems in the future. ~Dreamless~ |
| LSMunch 2007-07-17 ch 1,  | abuseAwesome poem. I like how the rhyming wasn't forced, it just was there and gave the poem a great rhythm and flow. I love the last line as well, "it's far too early to tell." This was great, hope you write more! |
| Wishdreamer89 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseThat read nicely for sure, though i might be a bit confused. ^_^ I mean, the meaning has something to do with waiting, right? the pause the night and slumber brings to living, the fighters to go at it the next morning. I like it, this poem was so different and well written. unfolding bit by bit. So am i misconcepting that meaning? :P you're a great writer. ~Wishdream |
| Professional Dreamer 2007-07-17 ch 1, | abuseI particularly liked the imagery at the beginning of the poem, and you've worked well with rhyme and rhythm. |