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SilverIsamu
2008-07-02
ch 3,
abuseHehe! I love Eros! And Aroura is halarious as well, they make a great couple! hehe, she thought he was going to kiss her, lol!
keep up the good work!

~SilverIsamu
Tragedy of Light and Dark
2008-06-10
ch 14,
abuseROFL! Mariko caught him with his pants down! That's great! I really like the cute moment between them and it's nice that he doesn't think she's a **.

I wonder what Hisaka has to tell Aroura.
Kurogane Black Ninja
2008-06-10
ch 14,
abuseI like the MarikoAsagi tidbit in this chapter. It really shows a darker and more psychotic side of what appears to be either his love for her, or his need to protect her.

I wasn't that thrown off by the fact that he was the killer. He seems the type. Remember, we don't know anything about him so it's safe to assume anything right now.

I wonder how Eros will deal with his memory issues when he finds out who he is...I feel sorry for Aroura when that happens...
Spirit Tigress
2008-06-09
ch 5,
abuseInteresting...I'm not sure what to think of Mariko
Utena Himemiya
2008-06-09
ch 14, anon.
abuseI was very suprised to see Himamari at the party but I guess it's nice to see her happy. I don't really like Trista too much, she's too jealous of other people and I like Chacha and Hisaka together.

It was a shocker to find out that Asagi was the killer. I wonder what his motives are.
Yaoi Love-Love Girl
2008-06-09
ch 14, anon.
abuseMariko is so oblivious! I wonder if she'll find out what Asagi's been doing since they live together and all.
Yaoi Love-Love Girl
2008-06-09
ch 13, anon.
abuseI'm so behind! Nu! But I shall catch up! I'm going to read two chapters now. I wonder what they are planning to do int he dojo. I really want to find out so I'm reading ahead.
Iruka-sama
2008-06-09
ch 14, anon.
abuseWow, Asagi is a killer? What a shock! I hope that Eros doesn't get his memory back and I feel sorry for Aroura...Poor girl. I hope things look up for our cast.
Shining Silver Phoenix
2008-06-07
ch 3,
abuseHello! Nice chapter here! Nice story! I wanna let you know that I have chapters 25 and 26 of TCR up if you wanna see/review. Sorry to ask in case you're busy. I like your story though.
weirdo-lover
2008-06-06
ch 3,
abuseOk so...I've only gotten to chgapter three...and I must say I ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT! I'll read the rest of the chapters whebever I get the chance to! I promise!

...This sounds really awesome, and... exciting and um...-cough-sexy-cough- yes, so, I'm looking forward to it!
SilverIsamu
2008-06-06
ch 14, anon.
abuseWow, Asagi is a killer? You really suprised me there. I didn't think he would be. I wonder what will happen when Aroura is told about Eros, or at least I think that's what Hisaka wanted to tell her...Update soon!
Mami07
2008-06-06
ch 14, anon.
abuseI like it! It's really good!
cat-and-mouse
2008-06-06
ch 14,
abuseAwesome, you updated!
I had no idea that it was Asagi killing those guys; I was thinking it was another Syntacom! I think I need to sit todwn... It's weird...Asagi never struck me as the type of guy to kill someone if it wasn't in a fight. Wow...
I wonder what Hisaka needs to say to Aroura? And is it really a good idea to give Eros his memory back? What if it's something horrible?

Oh, a suggestion! After someone's done talking, and they end the sentence with a period, don't write a period! Write a comma. That's the proper way to do it. I'm not trying to sound mean, I'm just saying.

Okay, see you later, and thanks for the Robotic Remedy review.
Emeralds Rose
2008-05-16
ch 5,
abuseThat was definantly a superb battle you laid out there.

To add, you also gave me a few writing tips without even knowing it :P So thank you for that. (Note: I'm not stealing any idea's from you, I just watched how you wrote out the structure and noticed there were a few things I would normally put in, but instead you didn't, and the story still played out as it did.)

To also top things off, I really like this Asagi guy, for some freak reason he reminds me a lot of myself, in a more anime'ish type of sense :P

This will certainly push me to read even more now! Great job, and only four chapters in. I'm impressed!
Tragedy of Light and Dark
2008-05-16
ch 13,
abuseThis won't go well, I just have a feeling that Aroura won't handle it like I think she will...

I wonder if the Syntacoms will even be more after them because of this.

Whatever happened to Akemi and Tomiko anyway? Are they coming back?
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