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momochan123 2009-10-30 . chapter 4
Omgz THE LAST FEW CHAPTERS HAVE BEEN AWESOME XD I LUVEZ ALL THE CHARACTERS MAJOR PROPS ^^
momochan123 2009-10-30 . chapter 2
Good story the summary made it seem like it was gonna b like chobits but its still awesome :D i totally luvs this story ^^
Inu-Inu's Midget Friend 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
Ah, so many questions in this chapter and I really like the idea of Mizuki and Susumu. Personally, I like Mizuki better then Kisame. I don't usually go for the twin thing. Most twins are overrated characters, imho.

However, you did a great job on this chapter and I hope to see more of the two and definitely am rooting for them.
Iruka-sama 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
I nearly spelled my own name wrong. I'm such a dope sometimes. I think it's because Mizuki and Susumu have my attention. I think I like them a little better then some of the other couples in this series, even Mariko and Asagi.

I think I'll keep an eye on them in this story and see where they go. Now, if only Himemari would get away from Kyoui...
SilverIsamu 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
Good job on this chapter! I wonder who A17 is and when we'll see her fight. The thing with the cigarette was funny, rofl. Mizuki's face when she freaked out was classic!
Yaoi Love-Love Girl 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
Susumu was awesome in this chapter! I can't wait to see what's going to happen in the next one. You've got me all excited now!
MAMI07 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
Gud job! contue!
Utena Himemiya 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
Man, this is really getting good and your characters have their own unique fighting styles! It will be interesting to see what becomes of Eros and Asagi. I've been really interested in seeing their fights.

I have to admit that I'm a KisameSusumu shipper but you make MizukiSusumu sound really interesting. I like how their attitudes click.
Lime-sama 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
I wonder who A17 is referring to as 'him' at the end of this chapter. PErhaps we'll find out in the next one, huh? I really loved the fight scene and everyone's thoughts outside of it. Hyobe cracked me up so much! I love him to death XD.

Well, update soon! I want to see more of this story!
Black Bride Anna 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
This was such an action-packed chapter! I had no idea who I even wanted to win the fight! I was really torn for a while and Mizuki's defeat was definitely not expected.

I can't wait until your next chapter! You always manage to write such amazing fight scenes!
Kurogane Black Ninja 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
Beautiful fighting sequence among Susumu and Mizuki. Their fight had me on end the entire time. I was also wondering about Professor Gaiga's presence and what affect it will have on Eros and the other contestants. I also wondered if he had any robots that he himself submitted, since it was stated earlier by Loreli, I believe, that he often put experimental Syntacoms into the tournament to monitor them.

I wonder if A17, is one of them. She's definitely anything but human.

Also, you make me appreciate the couple of SusumuXMizuki a little more. I think I'm becoming a fan of them.
Tragedy of Light and Dark 2009-09-08 . chapter 20
A17 sounds interesting and I'm wondering if she's the pink-haired girl at the end of this chapter. If so, I can't wait to see her in action.

I like the fight between Mizuki and Susumu. It's nice to see that she can make him smile, even though I like he and Kisame better.
Hikou no Kokoro 2009-08-23 . chapter 1
. . . I'm not really fond of shojo, parental things, and romance . . . So yeah, but this sounds really great all the same. ^_^ So you DID get over 10 reviews, huh? But . . . for some strange reason . . . *glares* It sounds a lot like CLAMP's manga called "Chobits". I might be wrong 'cause I never read it, but I know the base of it. AND the fact that "Sacrifice" and this is going overlap each other (without spoilers etc. Only characters, different views and all the other things you said) reminds me on what CLAMP does. CLAMP usually overlaps stories, especially with xHolic and Tsubasa Chronicle. *Glares* Don't say anything if I'm right, and tell me that I'm wrong if I am wrong. (CLAMP is a group of japanese mangaka-s that wrote "Chobits", "Tsubasa Chronicle", and "xHolic". They also wrote more mangas, but, I don't know them :P)
Seth-Cypher 2009-07-22 . chapter 2
Well...we DO have robot puppies afterall. The notion of having a robot human as a friend wouldn't surprise me if it became reality.
HFGLF 2009-05-26 . chapter 19
I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds. I definitely look forward to your next chapter. I want to see Susumu in action!
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