it's good to see jack finally realizing how deep in shit he acutally is. i can't wait for the next chapter. good job!

I don't think this chapter sucks. I'm glad Jack's finally starting to realize and acknowledge his feelings for Milly. And I'll keep harassing you until you finish, because I wanna know what happens.

God I'm so happy you accept anonymous reviews...somoeone referred me to this story and I have to say I'm glad I didn't ignore them like I usually do. I hope you're planning to finish the series. It'd be a shame to see such a good plot stunted at this point. Happy writing, and I'll try to refer as many of my friends to your page as I can...if only to get you some encouragment to finish!

Hey Skye! You better not abandon this! It's really good! I really want to know what happened next. I think I'll refer this to some of my friends. If it's reviews you want, then I'm going to get you reviews damnit!

wow! This is turning out really good! Nice job!