I actually quite likes this; little snippets of stories, some dark humor, and some incredible diction. "That glass looked like the sort of thing you drank hard liquor out of, not something as embarrassingly good for your health as whole milk." was a brilliant line. I realize it ruins the point of this, but if you warm to the idea (and have the time) I'd suggest fleshing out some of these "random moments" into short stories, a few poems, a monologue - whatever style strikes your fancy. That's really the only critique I can offer. I'll have to take a look at your other works, when I have the time.

I liked this. It's...raw, you know? And the humor isn't over-done or in your face, but it's definitely noticeable. I had something like this, I called it "Depressed Or Genius" or someting, but it was realy bad. Anyways, good job.

Happy Writing
--WWK