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Reviews For: The Ceiling

soliloquium
2008-03-22
ch 1,
abuseo.o
this is...
HILARIOUS.
i loved it.
Patricia Louise
2007-09-17
ch 1,
abusehahaha. That's cute!
Nonya Soum
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseThis makes me laugh! It reminds me of when the ceiling in my school's gym fell. Varisty volleyball girls screaming, balls rolling and the classic "OMG THE SKY IS FALLING!! IT'S THE APOCALYPSE!"

Cleverly written and well placed. It is funny. Great job!!

Write on!!
Sekhmet Johnson
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuse..well, it's true!

This is easily the most insightful poem I've read today. I'm not joking. XD

I salute you, man. Not many people rhyme on fictionpress these days, and even fewer rhyme well, and we could probably count the number of funny ones on one hand..

But, hey, doesn't it feel grand to be one of the number? I love this to bits. It's going on my favourites.
storykeeper
2007-07-18
ch 1,
abuseYay! My ceiling! The poem still makes me laugh. *should be working*...
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