 Icyfire4w5 2009-10-20 . chapter 4Sack the professor, sack him! |
 Icyfire4w5 2009-10-20 . chapter 1I've spotted a typo. ;) |
 cyanide-arsenic 2009-10-19 . chapter 8Awesome |
 outsidersgirl 2009-08-18 . chapter 3this is good |
 daling 2009-02-01 . chapter 4n also the 'this is gonna hurt'
haha. kills the mood man.
but all in all,,good |
 daling 2009-02-01 . chapter 2dude.
its good n all.
but coul you like lay off the age.
kinda destroy the mood. but good one n all |
 Eos 2008-10-24 . chapter 10 Meh, you do realize that just washing the fluids off and out of her body isn't going to do much, right? There would still be a lot of muscular damage and bruising, so the last part was a little unnecessary. |
 gyabo 2008-09-02 . chapter 1can you do a swimming instructerand student one? one where they're pretty close in age and all. (i'm having swimming fever again)
thanks. and update. |
 xxxVxxx 2008-06-03 . chapter 3very, very good. |
 L 2008-06-01 . chapter 1 Very nice.
What about a rape one? Kidnapped rape?
That would be interesting...
The first one was really good. I also liked You can't make a sound and extra credit. =]
Keep up the good work - i'll be looking for your writing! |
 Demena 2008-05-31 . chapter 12wow i actually kinda liked these...lol...anyway i know you said you dont have a lot of time, but if you come back to writing these just thought i would give you an idea...
most of what you wrote has been "likely but unlikely" kinda thing...why not write one that would actually happen? Like boyfriend/girlfriend? I know my girlfriend and i sneak into her house when her parents arnt there and make out...but you could write about 2 ppl doing a little more than that lol...idk just a random idea...ITS 3 IN THE MORNING LEAVE ME ALONE =P
anyway...gj and i hope you come back =) |
 munseong 2008-03-14 . chapter 1Nice. How about bunch of boy students gang banging a single teacher? I don't know why i thought about this, but I'm currently going to an all boy school and some of my friends are nuts about young hot teachers. |
 Waiting on the World 2008-02-18 . chapter 11Oh my! Well, considering you haven't updated in a while and there are alot of other requests waiting, I don't see why you would do this, but I just have this picture of two kids in a play together... backstage... 13-14ish. Meh. Just an idea. |
 youshida101 2008-01-08 . chapter 8Oh... how sexy.
More brother/sister please
with the sister seducing her brother
please! |
 HazeleyedHoney 2008-01-03 . chapter 11How about a young priest a girl going to confession? |