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| xxxVxxx 2008-06-03 ch 3,  | abusevery, very good. |
| L 2008-06-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseVery nice. What about a rape one? Kidnapped rape? That would be interesting... The first one was really good. I also liked You can't make a sound and extra credit. =] Keep up the good work - i'll be looking for your writing! |
| Demena 2008-05-31 ch 12, | abusewow i actually kinda liked these...lol...anyway i know you said you dont have a lot of time, but if you come back to writing these just thought i would give you an idea... most of what you wrote has been "likely but unlikely" kinda thing...why not write one that would actually happen? Like boyfriend/girlfriend? I know my girlfriend and i sneak into her house when her parents arnt there and make out...but you could write about 2 ppl doing a little more than that lol...idk just a random idea...ITS 3 IN THE MORNING LEAVE ME ALONE =P anyway...gj and i hope you come back =) |
| munseong 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseNice. How about bunch of boy students gang banging a single teacher? I don't know why i thought about this, but I'm currently going to an all boy school and some of my friends are nuts about young hot teachers. |
| Waiting on the World 2008-02-18 ch 11, | abuseOh my! Well, considering you haven't updated in a while and there are alot of other requests waiting, I don't see why you would do this, but I just have this picture of two kids in a play together... backstage... 13-14ish. Meh. Just an idea. |
| youshida101 2008-01-08 ch 8, | abuseOh... how sexy. More brother/sister please with the sister seducing her brother please! |
| HazeleyedHoney 2008-01-03 ch 11, | abuseHow about a young priest a girl going to confession? |
| darkgurl92 2008-01-02 ch 9, | abusewow...u shuld really do some more...u shuld do one of babysitter's ... |
| XBroken-Dreams58X 2007-12-09 ch 1, | abuseThe subject matter is inappropriate for sure a site as this one. If you wish to write or read smut such as this use the appropriate sites in order to do that. I do believe NC 17 stories were banned over three to four years ago from both this and Please, move your story to a more suitable site. |
| Mysticol 2007-12-07 ch 11, | abuselove it :D |
| ChemicalCupcake 2007-12-03 ch 11, | abuseI love it. Thanks for using my idea. |
| werdddmill 2007-12-03 ch 11, | abuseThese are really great. Do one about like the maid of honor and best man at a wedding. that would be killer. |
| FM Radio 2007-11-29 ch 11, | abuseI want a story about a group of runaways, living in the apartment of sin. one girl seven guys. ranging between 14 and seventeen the girl is thirteen. Sorry this is a sucky review i am rushing1! Update soon! Draft me! |
| Black Lace Heart 2007-11-29 ch 11, | abuseupdate soon! |
| karatekid369 2007-11-29 ch 11, | abuseIt's not that bad. Seriously, at least you've gotten something out! I'm working on my next chapter right now, hoping to get it up before class change (Shh, admin doesn't know to block this site yet) and I'm hoping you guys will like it. I've seen several requests, and I'm fine with any of them. I dunno... There was that princess and her guard one... I could see that being good. |