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Icyfire4w5 2009-10-20 . chapter 4
Sack the professor, sack him!
Icyfire4w5 2009-10-20 . chapter 1
I've spotted a typo. ;)
cyanide-arsenic 2009-10-19 . chapter 8
Awesome
outsidersgirl 2009-08-18 . chapter 3
this is good
daling 2009-02-01 . chapter 4
n also the 'this is gonna hurt'
haha. kills the mood man.
but all in all,,good
daling 2009-02-01 . chapter 2
dude.
its good n all.
but coul you like lay off the age.
kinda destroy the mood. but good one n all
Eos 2008-10-24 . chapter 10
Meh, you do realize that just washing the fluids off and out of her body isn't going to do much, right? There would still be a lot of muscular damage and bruising, so the last part was a little unnecessary.
gyabo 2008-09-02 . chapter 1
can you do a swimming instructerand student one? one where they're pretty close in age and all. (i'm having swimming fever again)

thanks. and update.
xxxVxxx 2008-06-03 . chapter 3
very, very good.
L 2008-06-01 . chapter 1
Very nice.
What about a rape one? Kidnapped rape?
That would be interesting...

The first one was really good. I also liked You can't make a sound and extra credit. =]

Keep up the good work - i'll be looking for your writing!
Demena 2008-05-31 . chapter 12
wow i actually kinda liked these...lol...anyway i know you said you dont have a lot of time, but if you come back to writing these just thought i would give you an idea...

most of what you wrote has been "likely but unlikely" kinda thing...why not write one that would actually happen? Like boyfriend/girlfriend? I know my girlfriend and i sneak into her house when her parents arnt there and make out...but you could write about 2 ppl doing a little more than that lol...idk just a random idea...ITS 3 IN THE MORNING LEAVE ME ALONE =P

anyway...gj and i hope you come back =)
munseong 2008-03-14 . chapter 1
Nice. How about bunch of boy students gang banging a single teacher? I don't know why i thought about this, but I'm currently going to an all boy school and some of my friends are nuts about young hot teachers.
Waiting on the World 2008-02-18 . chapter 11
Oh my! Well, considering you haven't updated in a while and there are alot of other requests waiting, I don't see why you would do this, but I just have this picture of two kids in a play together... backstage... 13-14ish. Meh. Just an idea.
youshida101 2008-01-08 . chapter 8
Oh... how sexy.
More brother/sister please
with the sister seducing her brother

please!
HazeleyedHoney 2008-01-03 . chapter 11
How about a young priest a girl going to confession?
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