Tim sounds pretty amazing. It would suck to get dumped because someone would rather go with the Pope.

Um. I wanted to know if you really write this way, or if you actually choose to do so because you think it's creative of fun. Cause, I really can't understand it.

omg im soo happi 4 u & tim!! i hope u guyz stay 2getha 4eva and eva!! dis peom rocked my sox, it wuz phunomonal (sp??)!! & i luvd teh last line but i dont tink u haff 2 wury bout dat bc i tink teh pope is married

*stares* What happened to getting your things edited?

Look, apparently it is really hard for you to write English (?), so if you want, I'm offering up my servives as an editer. If you want, you can email me your things and I'll edit them for you.

You have some good ideas, I really think you do. It would just help A LOT if people could read them.

Once again,
Rowan.

Oh the spelling and grammar... @_@

I'm sorry, I tried to read it, but I really couldn't understand much. I think you should start using the spell checker instead of waiting for someone to proofread it for you. Just a suggestion.