konban wa

#1 - *adds to author alert*

#2 - *adds poem to favs*

#3 - I LOVED that last stanza. L-O-V-E-D. I can't even think coherently. That is the most beautiful stanza, and I'm absolutely in love with it!

(One spelling mistake: "two" instead of "to")

I almost cried for that stanza; I'm in absolute awe. Outstanding!

Ki o tsukete nee
-Shan-

wow.

A very powerful and moving short story, especially the last CPR actions.

I'm sorry for your loss.

...cpneb