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Oracle of Destiny
2007-11-10
ch 1,
abuseI liked this very much and I found it very haunting yet sad at the same time.

I liked how it flowed perfectly and there is an understatement of raw human emotion and fragile needs and wants in the world :) Great job with this and carry on with the good work.

By the way, thanks for reviewing me xD
concerto49
2007-08-21
ch 1,
abuseHeya. Concerto.
The structure was cool. I liked how it was divided and all.
Good use of the first and second person too.
Hm, interesting.
Anyhow. Cheers.
FoxyWriter
2007-07-19
ch 1,
abuseWow... nice poem, written nicely. Deep message too... hurting people is bad -.-

~FoxyWriter
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