i enjoyed the last two lines. interesting questions

"Undergone changes

Definitely inevitable"

i loved this line! I don't know why, but it sent chills down my spine. I wish I could explain, but something about it is really cool. Anyway, overall good poem, with an interesting format and stanzas that make one think

I liked this very much and I found it very haunting yet sad at the same time.

I liked how it flowed perfectly and there is an understatement of raw human emotion and fragile needs and wants in the world :) Great job with this and carry on with the good work.

By the way, thanks for reviewing me xD

Heya. Concerto.

The structure was cool. I liked how it was divided and all.

Good use of the first and second person too.

Hm, interesting.

Anyhow. Cheers.

Wow... nice poem, written nicely. Deep message too... hurting people is bad -.-

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