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| Oracle of Destiny 2007-11-10 ch 1,  | abuseI liked this very much and I found it very haunting yet sad at the same time. I liked how it flowed perfectly and there is an understatement of raw human emotion and fragile needs and wants in the world :) Great job with this and carry on with the good work. By the way, thanks for reviewing me xD |
| concerto49 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseHeya. Concerto. The structure was cool. I liked how it was divided and all. Good use of the first and second person too. Hm, interesting. Anyhow. Cheers. |
| FoxyWriter 2007-07-19 ch 1, | abuseWow... nice poem, written nicely. Deep message too... hurting people is bad -.- ~FoxyWriter |